From 529ede146afd125c76d86eb55969983af8ee21db Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Case Duckworth Date: Sat, 4 Apr 2015 23:58:22 -0700 Subject: Some revision & TOC inclusion --- cold-wind.txt | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) (limited to 'cold-wind.txt') diff --git a/cold-wind.txt b/cold-wind.txt index a21f007..432399b 100644 --- a/cold-wind.txt +++ b/cold-wind.txt @@ -12,10 +12,10 @@ project: | [Man of autumn][], cold wind, | blow down the trees' leaves. -| [Fire on the ground][]. The sky +| [Fire on the ground][]. The sky is | perfect water, frost-cold, | rippled only by flocks -| [of black birds][] flying, gone. +| [of black birds][] flying and gone. | Their brightness can blind | an uncareful watcher, work him | [in a froth of hands][], not-wings -- cgit 1.4.1-21-gabe81