From 529ede146afd125c76d86eb55969983af8ee21db Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Case Duckworth
Date: Sat, 4 Apr 2015 23:58:22 -0700
Subject: Some revision & TOC inclusion

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 elegyforanalternateself.txt | 9 ++++++---
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'elegyforanalternateself.txt')

diff --git a/elegyforanalternateself.txt b/elegyforanalternateself.txt
index ae6f614..16447f7 100644
--- a/elegyforanalternateself.txt
+++ b/elegyforanalternateself.txt
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ project:
 
 | Say there are no words.  Say that we are conjoined
 | from birth, or better still, say we are myself.
-| ---But I still talk to myself, I build my world
+| ---But I still talk to myself, I [build my world][]
 | through language, so if we say there are [no words][]
 | this is not enough.  Say we are instead some animal,
 | or better yet, [a plant][], or a flagellum motoring
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ project:
 | and then there's me is wrong.  Each thing is separate:
 | [there is no whole in the world][].  Say this is both good
 | and bad, or rather, say there is no good or bad but only
-| being, more and more of it always added, none taken out
+| being, [more and more of it always added][], none taken out
 | though it can be forgotten.  Say that forgetting
-| is a function of our remembering.  (Say that humans only
+| is a [function of our remembering][].  (Say that humans only
 | [worry about separation][].  Say that only humans feel it.)
 
 [no words]: hymnal.html
@@ -31,3 +31,6 @@ project:
 [only things that worry]: movingsideways.html
 [there is no whole in the world]: i-wanted-to-tell-you-something.html
 [worry about separation]: swansong-alt.html
+[build my world]: i-am.html
+[more and more of it always added]: no-nothing.html
+[function of our remembering]: collage-instrument.html
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