From 61baf210a9d0d4fffcd82751ba3419dd2feb349d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Case Duckworth
Date: Wed, 1 Apr 2015 16:29:46 -0700
Subject: Revise a few poems in Elegies

Also add a .gitignore.  How is this so late?
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 lovesong.txt | 12 ++++++++----
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'lovesong.txt')

diff --git a/lovesong.txt b/lovesong.txt
index 9f86d19..a6f3c2a 100644
--- a/lovesong.txt
+++ b/lovesong.txt
@@ -19,18 +19,18 @@ Walking along in the dark is a good way to begin a song.
 Walking home in the dark after a long day chasing criminals is another.
 Running away from an imagined evil is no way to begin a story.
 
-I am telling you this because you wanted to know what it's like to tell something so beautiful everyone will cry.
+I am telling you this because you wanted to know what it's like to tell [something so beautiful][] everyone will cry.
 I am telling you because I want you to know what it is to keep everything inside of you.
 I am telling you.
 
 Can you see?
 Can you see into me and reach in your hand and pull me inside out, like an [old shirt][]?
-Will you wear me until I unravel on your shoulders, will you cut me apart and use my skin to clean up the cola you spill on the floor when you're drunk?
+Will you wear me until I unravel on your shoulders, will you cut me apart and use my skin to clean up the [cola you spill][] on the floor when you're drunk?
 
 I want you to know that I want you to know.
 Do you want me?
 To know is to know.
-I, you want we.
+[I, you want we.][]
 We want.
 That is why we're here.
 To want is to be is to want and I want you.
@@ -41,9 +41,13 @@ There is a way to end every story, [every song][].
 Every criminal must be caught.
 Even those who cry dry their tears.
 I cannot tell you all I want because I want to tell you everything.
-There is no art because there is no mirror big enough.
+[There is no art because there is no mirror big enough.][]
 We wake up every day.
 Sometimes we sleep.
 
 [old shirt]: ronaldmcdonald.html
 [every song]: swansong.html
+[something so beautiful]: window.html
+[cola you spill]: ex-machina.html
+[I, you want we.]: poetry-time.html
+[There is no art because there is no mirror big enough.]: hands.html
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