From f402a2b6d43a0411028b14a19cb449a7da0f5314 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Case Duckworth Date: Fri, 27 Feb 2015 15:51:11 -0700 Subject: Change line breaks to sentences in prose pieces --- src/dream.txt | 25 +++++++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) (limited to 'src/dream.txt') diff --git a/src/dream.txt b/src/dream.txt index b933977..90312e9 100644 --- a/src/dream.txt +++ b/src/dream.txt @@ -18,11 +18,12 @@ project: link: cereal ... -It had gotten cold. He went to lay down in bed with a pad and paper. He -began to write. Although he hadn't tried it much in bed before, he liked it -mostly. His arm got tired journeying across the page like a series of -switchbacks down the wall of the Grand Canyon. He wrote this down in the -margin, for later: +It had gotten cold. +He went to lay down in bed with a pad and paper. +He began to write. +Although he hadn't tried it much in bed before, he liked it mostly. +His arm got tired journeying across the page like a series of switchbacks down the wall of the Grand Canyon. +He wrote this down in the margin, for later: ```hand Arm journeying across \ @@ -32,12 +33,16 @@ backs down the wall \ of the Grand Canyon \ ``` -His arm began to pain him. He adjusted his position in the bed. It didn't -help much with the pain. It still hurt as he wrote. He began to be -distracted by his mother's music playing in the next room. +His arm began to pain him. +He adjusted his position in the bed. +It didn't help much with the pain. +It still hurt as he wrote. +He began to be distracted by his mother's music playing in the next room. "Could you turn that down please" he hollered across the wall to his mother. -She made no reply (music too loud). He gave his arm a break to look at what -he'd written. He couldn't make heads or tails of it. It looked like Arabic. +She made no reply (music too loud). +He gave his arm a break to look at what he'd written. +He couldn't make heads or tails of it. +It looked like Arabic. He woke up gasping in a sweat. -- cgit 1.4.1-21-gabe81