From f402a2b6d43a0411028b14a19cb449a7da0f5314 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Case Duckworth Date: Fri, 27 Feb 2015 15:51:11 -0700 Subject: Change line breaks to sentences in prose pieces --- src/planks.txt | 24 ++++++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) (limited to 'src/planks.txt') diff --git a/src/planks.txt b/src/planks.txt index 698f982..648122f 100644 --- a/src/planks.txt +++ b/src/planks.txt @@ -23,16 +23,20 @@ EVERYTHING CHANGES OR EVERYTHING STAYS THE SAME ``` -This sat alone on a blank notecard in Paul's typewriter. He stared at it, -sipping at his too-hot coffee. This made sense to him. +This sat alone on a blank notecard in Paul's typewriter. +He stared at it, sipping at his too-hot coffee. +This made sense to him. -He looked at the spot on the wall where he wanted a window to be, at the rough -planks above his desk as they were lit by the bare hanging lightbulb. He -sipped his coffee again. It was still too hot. His Woodworking Shack was -becoming full of wood that was not furniture. He feared it would never become -so. +He looked at the spot on the wall where he wanted a window to be, at the rough planks above his desk as they were lit by the bare hanging lightbulb. +He sipped his coffee again. +It was still too hot. +His Woodworking Shack was becoming full of wood that was not furniture. +He feared it would never become so. -He threw open the door to the snow and the ground below it. He reached for -his axe on the wall. He reconsidered. He took a few tentative steps onto the -blankness on his own. He wasn't cold, not yet. He walked into the forest. +He threw open the door to the snow and the ground below it. +He reached for his axe on the wall. +He reconsidered. +He took a few tentative steps onto the blankness on his own. +He wasn't cold, not yet. +He walked into the forest. The snow crunched under his feet and did not echo. -- cgit 1.4.1-21-gabe81