From f402a2b6d43a0411028b14a19cb449a7da0f5314 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Case Duckworth Date: Fri, 27 Feb 2015 15:51:11 -0700 Subject: Change line breaks to sentences in prose pieces --- src/punch.txt | 31 +++++++++++++++++-------------- 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-) (limited to 'src/punch.txt') diff --git a/src/punch.txt b/src/punch.txt index 9509143..b2677d8 100644 --- a/src/punch.txt +++ b/src/punch.txt @@ -20,20 +20,23 @@ project: When he finally got back to work he was surprised they threw him a party. _**WELCOME BACK PAUL!**_ was written on a big banner across the back wall. -Someone had ordered a confectioner's-sugar cake with frosting flowers on the -corners. It said the same thing as the banner. "Welcome back, Paul" said -Jill as he was at the punch bowl. The cup was on the table as he ladled punch -in with his right hand. His left was wrapped in gauze. +Someone had ordered a confectioner's-sugar cake with frosting flowers on the corners. +It said the same thing as the banner. +"Welcome back, Paul" said Jill as he was at the punch bowl. +The cup was on the table as he ladled punch in with his right hand. +His left was wrapped in gauze. -"Let me help you with that" said Jill. Paul had a strange feeling this had -happened before. She took the ladle and their hands touched. She picked the -cup up in her right hand and used her left to lift the spoon. "You know" she -said "we were worried about you. When Jerry heard about your hand he said -'There goes one of our best data entry men.'" "I still can't really move my -left hand" said Paul. "That's alright you can take your time with the entry." +"Let me help you with that" said Jill. +Paul had a strange feeling this had happened before. +She took the ladle and their hands touched. +She picked the cup up in her right hand and used her left to lift the spoon. +"You know" she said "we were worried about you. +When Jerry heard about your hand he said 'There goes one of our best data entry men.'" +"I still can't really move my left hand" said Paul. +"That's alright you can take your time with the entry." "I'm sorry." -"Sorry for what" she looked at his eyes. He imagined her seeing fisheye -versions of herself in them. "I don't know" he said because it was true. -"It's alright anyway" she said and placed the full punch cup in his right -hand. +"Sorry for what" she looked at his eyes. +He imagined her seeing fisheye versions of herself in them. +"I don't know" he said because it was true. +"It's alright anyway" she said and placed the full punch cup in his right hand. -- cgit 1.4.1-21-gabe81