From f402a2b6d43a0411028b14a19cb449a7da0f5314 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Case Duckworth Date: Fri, 27 Feb 2015 15:51:11 -0700 Subject: Change line breaks to sentences in prose pieces --- src/snow.txt | 42 +++++++++++++++++++++++------------------- 1 file changed, 23 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-) (limited to 'src/snow.txt') diff --git a/src/snow.txt b/src/snow.txt index 3bb250a..dda1ede 100644 --- a/src/snow.txt +++ b/src/snow.txt @@ -18,26 +18,30 @@ project: link: shed ... -_I don't care if they burn_ he wrote on his last blank notecard. He'd have to -go to the Office Supply Store tomorrow after work. +_I don't care if they burn_ he wrote on his last blank notecard. +He'd have to go to the Office Supply Store tomorrow after work. -He looked at what he'd written. He'd been thinking about this for a while, -felt the frustration build slowly like a thundercloud in the back of his mind. -He thought he should write something else on the card, but everything he -thought of seemed too confessional or too real compromising. He didn't want -anyone, not even the notecards, to know what he was thinking. He decided to -try for more of an interview with the paper. +He looked at what he'd written. +He'd been thinking about this for a while, felt the frustration build slowly like a thundercloud in the back of his mind. +He thought he should write something else on the card, but everything he thought of seemed too confessional or too real compromising. +He didn't want anyone, not even the notecards, to know what he was thinking. +He decided to try for more of an interview with the paper. -_Why?_ asked the notecard. _Because there is nothing important on any of -them_ he wrote back. _What do you mean? You have some good stuff in that top -drawer there._ He looked in the top drawer. It was stuffed full of notecards -in no organization. He could see bits and pieces of thoughts like leaves -crunched underfoot in autumn. _It will take so much organization_ he wrote. +_Why?_ asked the notecard. +_Because there is nothing important on any of them_ he wrote back. +_What do you mean? +You have some good stuff in that top drawer there._ +He looked in the top drawer. +It was stuffed full of notecards in no organization. +He could see bits and pieces of thoughts like leaves crunched underfoot in autumn. +_It will take so much organization_ he wrote. -_Why is organization important? Remember the trees, how they formed rows -without trying. No matter how the ideas fall, they make something. The snow -does that too_ he wrote. _It doesn't try to make anything but it does._ +_Why is organization important? +Remember the trees, how they formed rows without trying. +No matter how the ideas fall, they make something. +The snow does that too_ he wrote. +_It doesn't try to make anything but it does._ -_No the snow is different_ the notecard was annoyed. _The snow is a blank -canvas that humans build into shapes or doppelgangers. It makes nothing on -its own._ +_No the snow is different_ the notecard was annoyed. +_The snow is a blank canvas that humans build into shapes or doppelgangers. +It makes nothing on its own._ -- cgit 1.4.1-21-gabe81