From f402a2b6d43a0411028b14a19cb449a7da0f5314 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Case Duckworth
Date: Fri, 27 Feb 2015 15:51:11 -0700
Subject: Change line breaks to sentences in prose pieces

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 src/stagnant.txt | 32 +++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

(limited to 'src/stagnant.txt')

diff --git a/src/stagnant.txt b/src/stagnant.txt
index 6de7875..121f4fe 100644
--- a/src/stagnant.txt
+++ b/src/stagnant.txt
@@ -18,22 +18,20 @@ project:
       link: snow
 ...
 
-"Riding the bus to work is a good way to think or to read" Paul thought to
-himself on the bus ride to work.  His thoughts couldn't become real to him
-because he didn't want to look insane to everyone else on the bus.  His
-thoughts came to him like someone yelling over a hard wind.  He was trying to
-write them on his memory but the act of writing was easier and more immediate
-than that of listening.  He was afraid that when he looked at his memory later
-he wouldn't be able to read what was written.
+"Riding the bus to work is a good way to think or to read" Paul thought to himself on the bus ride to work.
+His thoughts couldn't become real to him because he didn't want to look insane to everyone else on the bus.
+His thoughts came to him like someone yelling over a hard wind.
+He was trying to write them on his memory but the act of writing was easier and more immediate than that of listening.
+He was afraid that when he looked at his memory later he wouldn't be able to read what was written.
 
-"Thoughts are like the wind outside a moving bus" he thought "or rather the
-bus is a brain slamming into columns of stagnant air causing them to whistle
-past in a confusion of something."  He could barely hear the voice yelling to
-him over the wind.  "Speak up" he thought to the voice, then remembered it was
-his own.  He wished he'd remembered a book to read.
+"Thoughts are like the wind outside a moving bus" he thought "or rather the bus is a brain slamming into columns of stagnant air causing them to whistle past in a confusion of something."
+He could barely hear the voice yelling to him over the wind.
+"Speak up" he thought to the voice, then remembered it was his own.
+He wished he'd remembered a book to read.
 
-He looked at his hands to pass the time.  They were dry in the winter air that
-had seeped its way into the bus.  He tried to figure out how many hours they
-would make it before cracking and bleeding.  "Maybe three or four" he thought
-accidentally out loud.  He looked around expecting stares from everyone on the
-seat.  He was surprised that he was the only one on the bus.
+He looked at his hands to pass the time.
+They were dry in the winter air that had seeped its way into the bus.
+He tried to figure out how many hours they would make it before cracking and bleeding.
+"Maybe three or four" he thought accidentally out loud.
+He looked around expecting stares from everyone on the seat.
+He was surprised that he was the only one on the bus.
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