From c281dab07e735070bc4d3b889ebd700a8bbfd932 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Case Duckworth
Date: Thu, 12 Mar 2015 19:36:49 -0700
Subject: Change 'Something's to use subtitles; add links

---
 src/music-433.txt   | 6 ++++--
 src/no-nothing.txt  | 6 +++---
 src/poetry-time.txt | 3 ++-
 3 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

(limited to 'src')

diff --git a/src/music-433.txt b/src/music-433.txt
index c9e9e5f..08a148a 100644
--- a/src/music-433.txt
+++ b/src/music-433.txt
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: Something about all music being performances of _4′33″_ in places where other bands happen to be playing
+title: Something
+subtitle: 'about all music being performances of _4′33″_ in places where other bands happen to be playing'
 genre: verse
 
 dedication: '[Randall](https://xkcd.com/1199/)'
@@ -21,7 +22,7 @@ project:
 ...
 
 Silence lies underneath us all in the same way \
-the Nile has a river underneath ten times as large \
+[the Nile has a river underneath ten times as large][nile] \
 (although this is an urban legend, apparently).
 
 So underneath [truth][] or legend, flowing by \
@@ -50,3 +51,4 @@ although this is an urban legend, apparently.
 [silence]: nothing-is-ever-over.html
 [songs]: swansong.html
 [sound one sound]: swansong-alt.html
+[nile]: http://members.authorsguild.net/svobodni/resonance_80307.htm "Personals"
diff --git a/src/no-nothing.txt b/src/no-nothing.txt
index af53ad0..c48fa14 100644
--- a/src/no-nothing.txt
+++ b/src/no-nothing.txt
@@ -8,10 +8,10 @@ project:
 ...
 
 | While [swimming in the river][]
-| I saw underneath it a river
+| I saw [underneath it a river][]
 | of stars.  Only there was no
 | river: it was noon.  You can
-| say [the sun is a river][]; you
+| say the sun is a river; you
 | can argue the stars back it
 | like [shirts behind a closet][]
 | door; you can say [the earth][]
@@ -60,7 +60,6 @@ project:
 | origins deep within itself.
 
 [swimming in the river]: father.html
-[the sun is a river]: music-433.html
 [shirts behind a closet]: lovessong.html
 [the earth]: big-dipper.html
 [nor door]: amber-alert.html
@@ -69,3 +68,4 @@ project:
 [might've drowned]: in-bed.html
 [wailing and gnashing]: http://biblehub.com/luke/13-28.htm
 [river underneath]: howtoread.html
+[underneath it a river]: music-433.html
diff --git a/src/poetry-time.txt b/src/poetry-time.txt
index 6223070..a861901 100644
--- a/src/poetry-time.txt
+++ b/src/poetry-time.txt
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 ---
-title: Something about the nature of poetry and time
+title: Something
+subtitle: about the nature of poetry and time
 genre: verse
 
 project:
-- 
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