From d6231aa5524a10e543368115e1376f835aae8b58 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Case Duckworth
Date: Tue, 21 Apr 2015 17:42:38 -0700
Subject: Revise after thesis defense

---
 text/the-night-we-met.txt | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'text/the-night-we-met.txt')

diff --git a/text/the-night-we-met.txt b/text/the-night-we-met.txt
index aa6d89c..16987bb 100644
--- a/text/the-night-we-met.txt
+++ b/text/the-night-we-met.txt
@@ -17,13 +17,13 @@ project:
 | in the dark, remember?  You told me time was
 
 | pregnant with all things.  I should've said
-| something, to draw you out from your place
+| something, to draw you out from your safety
 | in the dark.  Remember, you told me time was
 | only an illusion, [and memory was][] only
 
-| something to draw.  You, out from your place,
+| something to draw.  You, out from your safety,
 | I out from mine, that night, I believed in you.
-| Only illusion and memory were one, lying
+| And illusion and memory were one, lying
 | [down on your couch][], through the night you drew
 
 | me out from mine.  That night, I believed in you
-- 
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