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To Daniel

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an elaboration of a previous comment

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To Daniel

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There are more modern ideals of beauty
than yours, young padowan. Jessica has
some assets, that I’ll give you easily,
but in my women I prefer pizzazz.

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I don’t want to bring you down, or make you think
that your perfected woman isn’t so.
It’s just that, like Adam said, 2006
has come and gone. What did she do

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in that year anyway? IMDB
has, surprisingly, none, though in ’05
she’s in four titles. Sin City
I’ve never seen, although from many I’ve

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heard it’s good. But it’s still irrelevant—
no matter how comely, she lacks talent.

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There are more modern ideals of beauty
than yours, young padowan. Jessica has
some assets, that I’ll give you easily,
but in my women I prefer pizzazz.

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I don’t want to bring you down, or make you think
that your perfected woman isn’t so.
It’s just that, like Adam said, 2006
has come and gone. What did she do

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in that year anyway? IMDB
has, surprisingly, none, though in ’05
she’s in four titles. Sin City
I’ve never seen, although from many I’ve

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heard it’s good. But it’s still irrelevant—
no matter how comely, she lacks talent.

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