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     <section class="thing verse">
     <p><a href="100-lines.html">100 lines</a> <a href="about-the-author.html">about the author</a> <a href="amber-alert.html">(Amber): alert</a>!</p>
-    <p><a href="and.html">And</a> <a href="angeltoabraham.html">the angel, to Abraham</a>, <a href="apollo11.html">on seeing the panorama of the Apollo 11 landing site</a>: “<a href="arspoetica.html">Ars poetica</a>: <a href="art.html">art</a>, an <a href="axe.html">axe</a>, <a href="big-dipper.html">the big dipper</a> and <a href="boar.html">the boar</a>.<br />The <a href="boy_bus.html">boy on the bus</a> is <a href="building.html">building</a>. <a href="call-me-aural-pleasure.html">Call me</a> <a href="cereal.html"><em>Cereal</em></a> or <a href="cold-wind.html"><em>Cold Wind</em></a>.”<br /> <a href="creation-myth.html">Creation myth</a>: <a href="deadman.html">dead man</a> = <a href="death-zone.html">the death zone</a> =<br /><a href="deathstrumpet.html">Death’s trumpet</a>. <a href="dream.html">Dream</a> <a href="early.html">early</a>.</p>
-    <p><a href="elegyforanalternateself.html">Elegy for an alternate self:</a> an <a href="epigraph.html">epigraph</a>,<br /><a href="ex-machina.html"><em>ex machina</em></a> and <a href="exasperated.html">exasperated</a>; <a href="father.html">Father</a><br /><a href="feedingtheraven.html">feeding the raven</a>, <a href="finding-the-lion.html">finding the lion</a>, setting a <a href="fire.html">fire</a>.</p>
-    <p><a href="found-typewriter-poem.html">Look</a>: <a href="hands.html">hands</a>!<br /><a href="hard-game.html">A hard game</a>: <a href="hardware.html">hardware</a>.<br /><a href="howithappened.html">How it happened</a>?<br /><a href="howtoread.html">How to read this</a> <a href="hymnal.html">hymnal</a>:</p>
-    <p>“<a href="i-am.html">I am</a>.”<br />“<a href="i-think-its-you.html">I think it’s you (but it’s not)</a>.”</p>
-    <p><a href="i-wanted-to-tell-you-something.html">I wanted to tell you something</a> <a href="in-bed.html">in bed</a>, the <a href="initial-conditions.html">initial conditions</a><br />of <a href="january.html">January</a>’s <a href="joke.html">joke</a> are <a href="lappel-du-vide.html">L’appel du vide</a>.<br /><a href="largest-asteroid.html">The largest asteroid in the asteroid belt</a> is the <a href="last-bastion.html">last bastion</a>, the<br /><a href="last-passenger.html">last passenger</a> <a href="leaf.html">leaf</a>, the <a href="leg.html">leg</a> <a href="likingthings.html">liking things</a>.</p>
-    <p><a href="listen.html">Listen</a>: <a href="love-as-god.html">love as God</a> is better<br />than a <a href="lovesong.html">love song</a>, <a href="man.html">man</a>.</p>
-    <p><a href="moon-drowning.html">The moon is drowning</a>.<br /><a href="moongone.html">The moon is gone and in its place: a mirror</a>.<br /><a href="mountain.html">The mountain</a>’s <a href="movingsideways.html">moving sideways</a>,<br /><a href="music-433.html">something about all music being performances of <em>4′33″</em> in places where other bands happen to be playing</a>.<br />Listen: <a href="no-nothing.html">no nothing</a>, no <a href="notes.html">notes</a>.<br /><a href="nothing-is-ever-over.html">Nothing is ever over</a>.</p>
-    <p><a href="onformalpoetry.html">On formal poetry</a>, <a href="options.html">options</a>:<br />an <a href="ouroboros_memory.html">ouroboros of memory</a>, <a href="paul.html"><em>Paul</em></a>, <a href="philosophy.html">philosophy</a>,<br />a <a href="phone.html">phone</a>, <a href="planks.html">planks</a>. A <a href="plant.html">litany for a plant</a>.</p>
-    <p><a href="poetry-time.html">Something about the nature of poetry and time</a>:<br /><a href="prelude.html">prelude</a>, <a href="problems.html">problems</a>, <a href="proverbs.html">proverbs</a>, <a href="punch.html">punch</a>, <a href="purpose-dogs.html">the purpose of dogs</a>.</p>
-    <p>A <a href="question.html">question</a>: if <a href="real-writer.html">a real writer</a> <a href="reports.html">reports</a> on<br />the <a href="riptide_memory.html">riptide of memory</a>, does <a href="ronaldmcdonald.html">Ronald McDonald</a> wear<br /><a href="roughgloves.html">rough gloves</a> or a <a href="sapling.html">sapling</a>?</p>
-    <p><a href="seasonal-affective-disorder.html">Seasonal affective disorder</a> is part of the <a href="sense-of-it.html">sense of it</a>.<br />The <a href="serengeti.html">serengeti</a> is a <a href="shed.html">shed</a>.<br /><a href="shipwright.html">The shipwright</a> builds <a href="sixteenth-chapel.html">the sixteenth chapel</a> in <a href="snow.html">snow</a>.</p>
+    <p><a href="and.html">And</a> <a href="angeltoabraham.html">the angel, to Abraham</a>, <a href="apollo11.html">on seeing the panorama<br />of the Apollo 11 landing site</a>: “<a href="arspoetica.html">Ars poetica</a>: <a href="art.html">art</a>, an <a href="axe.html">axe</a>,<br /><a href="big-dipper.html">the big dipper</a> and <a href="boar.html">the boar</a>. The <a href="boy_bus.html">boy on the bus</a> is <a href="building.html">building</a>.<br /><a href="call-me-aural-pleasure.html">Call me</a> <a href="cereal.html"><em>Cereal</em></a> or <a href="cold-wind.html"><em>Cold Wind</em></a>.”</p>
+    <p><a href="creation-myth.html">Creation myth</a>: <a href="deadman.html">dead man</a> = <a href="death-zone.html">the death zone</a> =<br /><a href="deathstrumpet.html">Death’s trumpet</a>. <a href="dream.html">Dream</a> <a href="early.html">early</a>.</p>
+    <p><a href="elegyforanalternateself.html">Elegy for an alternate self:</a> an <a href="epigraph.html">epigraph</a>,<br /><a href="ex-machina.html"><em>ex machina</em></a> and <a href="exasperated.html">exasperated</a>; <a href="father.html">Father</a> <a href="feedingtheraven.html">feeding<br />the raven</a>, <a href="finding-the-lion.html">finding the lion</a>, setting a <a href="fire.html">fire</a>.</p>
+    <p><a href="found-typewriter-poem.html">Look</a>: <a href="hands.html">hands</a>!<br /><a href="hard-game.html">A hard game</a>: <a href="hardware.html">hardware</a>.<br />(<a href="howithappened.html">How it happened</a>?)<br /> <a href="howtoread.html">How to read this</a> <a href="hymnal.html">hymnal</a>:<br />“<a href="i-am.html">I am</a>.” “<a href="i-think-its-you.html">I think it’s<br />you (but it’s not)</a>.”</p>
+    <p><a href="i-wanted-to-tell-you-something.html">I wanted to tell you something</a> <a href="in-bed.html">in bed</a>—<br />the <a href="initial-conditions.html">initial conditions</a> of <a href="january.html">January</a>’s <a href="joke.html">joke</a> are <a href="lappel-du-vide.html"><em>l’appel du vide</em></a>.<br /><a href="largest-asteroid.html">The largest asteroid in the asteroid belt</a> is the <a href="last-bastion.html">last bastion</a>,<br />the <a href="last-passenger.html">last passenger</a> <a href="leaf.html">leaf</a>, the <a href="leg.html">leg</a> <a href="likingthings.html">liking things</a>.</p>
+    <p><a href="listen.html">Listen</a>: <a href="love-as-god.html">love as God</a> loves, better<br />than a <a href="lovesong.html">love song</a>, <a href="man.html">man</a>.</p>
+    <p><a href="moon-drowning.html">The moon is drowning</a>. <a href="moongone.html">The moon is gone,<br />and in its place: a mirror</a>. <a href="mountain.html">The mountain</a>’s<br /><a href="movingsideways.html">moving sideways</a>, <a href="music-433.html">something about all music<br />being performances of <em>4′33″</em> in places<br />where other bands happen to be playing</a>. Listen:<br /><a href="no-nothing.html">no nothing</a>, no <a href="notes.html">notes</a>, <a href="nothing-is-ever-over.html"><em>nothing</em> is ever over</a>.</p>
+    <p><a href="onformalpoetry.html">On formal poetry</a>, <a href="options.html">options</a>:<br />an <a href="ouroboros_memory.html">ouroboros of memory</a>, <a href="paul.html"><em>Paul</em></a>, <a href="philosophy.html">philosophy</a>,<br /><a href="phone.html">phone</a>s, or <a href="planks.html">planks</a>. A <a href="plant.html">litany for a plant</a>.</p>
+    <p><a href="poetry-time.html">Something about the nature<br />of poetry and time</a>: <a href="prelude.html">prelude</a>, <a href="problems.html">problems</a>, <a href="proverbs.html">proverbs</a>.<br /><a href="punch.html">Punch</a> is <a href="purpose-dogs.html">the purpose of dogs</a>.</p>
+    <p>A <a href="question.html">question</a>: if <a href="real-writer.html">a real writer</a> <a href="reports.html">reports</a> on<br />the <a href="riptide_memory.html">riptide of memory</a>, does <a href="ronaldmcdonald.html">Ronald McDonald</a><br />wear <a href="roughgloves.html">rough gloves</a> or a <a href="sapling.html">sapling</a>?</p>
+    <p><a href="seasonal-affective-disorder.html">Seasonal affective disorder</a> is part of the <a href="sense-of-it.html">sense of it</a>.<br />The <a href="serengeti.html">serengeti</a> is a <a href="shed.html">shed</a>. <a href="shipwright.html">The shipwright</a><br />builds <a href="sixteenth-chapel.html">the sixteenth chapel</a> in <a href="snow.html">snow</a>.</p>
     <p><a href="something-simple.html">Let’s start with something simple</a>:<br /><a href="spittle.html">spittle</a> on <a href="squirrel.html">the squirrel</a> sitting <a href="stagnant.html">stagnant</a>.<br /><a href="statements-frag.html">Statements</a> <a href="stayed-on-the-bus.html">stayed on the bus too long</a>.</p>
-    <p>A <a href="stump.html">stump</a> is not a <a href="swansong-alt.html">swansong</a> is not a <a href="swansong.html"><em>swan song</em></a>.<br /> <a href="swear.html">Swear</a> the <a href="table_contents.html">table of contents</a> is a <a href="tapestry.html">tapestry</a> of<br /><a href="telemarketer.html">telemarketer</a>s. Swear that <a href="the-night-we-met.html">the night we met, I was out of my mind</a>.</p>
-    <p><a href="the-sea_the-beach.html">The sea and the beach</a>, even <a href="theoceanoverflowswithcamels.html">the ocean overflows with camels</a>.<br /><a href="time-looks-up-to-the-sky.html">Time looks up to the sky</a>, <a href="todaniel.html">to Daniel</a> on the <a href="toilet.html">toilet</a><br />writing “<a href="toothpaste.html">Toothpaste</a>,” a <a href="treatise.html">treatise</a> on <a href="underwear.html">underwear</a> and <a href="wallpaper.html">wallpaper</a>.</p>
+    <p>A <a href="stump.html">stump</a> is not a <a href="swansong-alt.html">swansong</a> is not a <a href="swansong.html"><em>swan</em>, Song</a>.<br /> <a href="swear.html">Swear</a> the <a href="table_contents.html">table of contents</a> is a <a href="tapestry.html">tapestry</a>.<br /><a href="telemarketer.html">Telemarketer</a>s swear that <a href="the-night-we-met.html">the night we met, I<br />was out of my mind</a>.</p>
+    <p><a href="the-sea_the-beach.html">The sea and the beach</a>, even <a href="theoceanoverflowswithcamels.html">the ocean overflows<br />with camels</a>. <a href="time-looks-up-to-the-sky.html">Time looks up to the sky</a>,<br /><a href="todaniel.html">to Daniel</a> on the <a href="toilet.html">toilet</a> writing “<a href="toothpaste.html">Toothpaste</a>,”<br />a <a href="treatise.html">treatise</a> on <a href="underwear.html">underwear</a> and <a href="wallpaper.html">wallpaper</a>.</p>
     <p><a href="weplayedthosegamestoo.html">We played those games too</a>.</p>
-    <p><a href="when-im-sorry-i.html">When I’m sorry I wash dishes</a> in the <a href="window.html">window</a>, thinking about<br /><a href="words-meaning.html">words and meaning</a>. I feel <a href="worse-looking-over.html">worse,<br />looking over</a> at you, than when I’m <a href="writing.html">writing</a> an <a href="x-ray.html">x-ray</a> in <a href="yellow.html">yellow</a>.</p>
+    <p><a href="when-im-sorry-i.html">When I’m sorry I wash dishes</a> in the <a href="window.html">window</a>, thinking<br />about <a href="words-meaning.html">words and meaning</a>. I feel <a href="worse-looking-over.html">worse,<br />looking over</a> at you, than when I’m <a href="writing.html">writing</a><br />an <a href="x-ray.html">x-ray</a> in <a href="yellow.html">yellow</a>.</p>
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@@ -14,17 +14,18 @@ project:
 
 [And](and.html)
 [the angel, to Abraham](angeltoabraham.html),
-[on seeing the panorama of the Apollo 11 landing site](apollo11.html):
+[on seeing the panorama \
+of the Apollo 11 landing site](apollo11.html):
 "[Ars poetica](arspoetica.html):
 [art](art.html),
-an [axe](axe.html),
+an [axe](axe.html), \
 [the big dipper](big-dipper.html) and
-[the boar](boar.html). \
+[the boar](boar.html).
 The [boy on the bus](boy_bus.html) is
-[building](building.html).
+[building](building.html). \
 [Call me](call-me-aural-pleasure.html)
 [_Cereal_](cereal.html) or
-[_Cold Wind_](cold-wind.html)." \
+[_Cold Wind_](cold-wind.html)."
 
 [Creation myth](creation-myth.html):
 [dead man](deadman.html) =
@@ -37,8 +38,8 @@ The [boy on the bus](boy_bus.html) is
 an [epigraph](epigraph.html), \
 [_ex machina_](ex-machina.html) and
 [exasperated](exasperated.html);
-[Father](father.html) \
-[feeding the raven](feedingtheraven.html),
+[Father](father.html) [feeding \
+the raven](feedingtheraven.html),
 [finding the lion](finding-the-lion.html),
 setting a [fire](fire.html).
 
@@ -46,70 +47,72 @@ setting a [fire](fire.html).
 [hands](hands.html)! \
 [A hard game](hard-game.html):
 [hardware](hardware.html). \
-[How it happened](howithappened.html)? \
-[How to read this](howtoread.html)
-[hymnal](hymnal.html):
+([How it happened](howithappened.html)?) \
 
-"[I am](i-am.html)." \
-"[I think it’s you (but it’s not)](i-think-its-you.html)."
+[How to read this](howtoread.html)
+[hymnal](hymnal.html): \
+"[I am](i-am.html)." "[I think it’s \
+you (but it’s not)](i-think-its-you.html)."
 
 [I wanted to tell you something](i-wanted-to-tell-you-something.html)
-[in bed](in-bed.html), the
-[initial conditions](initial-conditions.html) \
+[in bed](in-bed.html)--- \
+the [initial conditions](initial-conditions.html)
 of [January](january.html)'s
 [joke](joke.html) are
-[L’appel du vide](lappel-du-vide.html). \
+[_l’appel du vide_](lappel-du-vide.html). \
 [The largest asteroid in the asteroid belt](largest-asteroid.html) is the
-[last bastion](last-bastion.html), the \
-[last passenger](last-passenger.html)
+[last bastion](last-bastion.html), \
+the [last passenger](last-passenger.html)
 [leaf](leaf.html), the
 [leg](leg.html)
 [liking things](likingthings.html).
 
 [Listen](listen.html):
-[love as God](love-as-god.html) is better \
+[love as God](love-as-god.html) loves, better \
 than a [love song](lovesong.html),
 [man](man.html).
 
-[The moon is drowning](moon-drowning.html). \
-[The moon is gone and in its place: a mirror](moongone.html). \
-[The mountain](mountain.html)'s
-[moving sideways](movingsideways.html), \
-[something about all music being performances of _4&prime;33&Prime;_ in places where other bands happen to be playing](music-433.html). \
-Listen:
+[The moon is drowning](moon-drowning.html).
+[The moon is gone, \
+and in its place: a mirror](moongone.html).
+[The mountain](mountain.html)'s \
+[moving sideways](movingsideways.html), [something about all music \
+being performances of _4&prime;33&Prime;_ in places \
+where other bands happen to be playing](music-433.html). Listen: \
 [no nothing](no-nothing.html), no
-[notes](notes.html). \
-[Nothing is ever over](nothing-is-ever-over.html).
+[notes](notes.html), [_nothing_ is ever over](nothing-is-ever-over.html).
 
 [On formal poetry](onformalpoetry.html),
 [options](options.html): \
 an [ouroboros of memory](ouroboros_memory.html),
 [_Paul_](paul.html),
 [philosophy](philosophy.html), \
-a [phone](phone.html),
+[phone](phone.html)s, or
 [planks](planks.html).
 A [litany for a plant](plant.html).
 
-[Something about the nature of poetry and time](poetry-time.html): \
+[Something about the nature \
+of poetry and time](poetry-time.html):
 [prelude](prelude.html),
 [problems](problems.html),
-[proverbs](proverbs.html),
-[punch](punch.html),
-[the purpose of dogs](purpose-dogs.html).
+[proverbs](proverbs.html). \
+[Punch](punch.html)
+is [the purpose of dogs](purpose-dogs.html).
 
 A [question](question.html): if
 [a real writer](real-writer.html)
 [reports](reports.html) on \
 the [riptide of memory](riptide_memory.html), does
-[Ronald McDonald](ronaldmcdonald.html) wear \
-[rough gloves](roughgloves.html) or
+[Ronald McDonald](ronaldmcdonald.html) \
+wear [rough gloves](roughgloves.html) or
 a [sapling](sapling.html)?
 
 [Seasonal affective disorder](seasonal-affective-disorder.html) is part of
 the [sense of it](sense-of-it.html). \
 The [serengeti](serengeti.html) is
-a [shed](shed.html). \
-[The shipwright](shipwright.html) builds
+a [shed](shed.html).
+[The shipwright](shipwright.html) \
+builds
 [the sixteenth chapel](sixteenth-chapel.html) in
 [snow](snow.html).
 
@@ -122,21 +125,22 @@ a [shed](shed.html). \
 
 A [stump](stump.html) is not
 a [swansong](swansong-alt.html) is not
-a [_swan song_](swansong.html). \
+a [_swan_, Song](swansong.html). \
 
 [Swear](swear.html)
 the [table of contents](table_contents.html) is
-a [tapestry](tapestry.html) of \
-[telemarketer](telemarketer.html)s. Swear that
-[the night we met, I was out of my mind](the-night-we-met.html).
+a [tapestry](tapestry.html). \
+[Telemarketer](telemarketer.html)s swear that
+[the night we met, I \
+was out of my mind](the-night-we-met.html).
 
 [The sea and the beach](the-sea_the-beach.html), even
-[the ocean overflows with camels](theoceanoverflowswithcamels.html). \
-[Time looks up to the sky](time-looks-up-to-the-sky.html),
+[the ocean overflows \
+with camels](theoceanoverflowswithcamels.html).
+[Time looks up to the sky](time-looks-up-to-the-sky.html), \
 [to Daniel](todaniel.html) on
-the [toilet](toilet.html) \
-writing
-"[Toothpaste](toothpaste.html),"
+the [toilet](toilet.html) writing
+"[Toothpaste](toothpaste.html)," \
 a [treatise](treatise.html) on
 [underwear](underwear.html) and
 [wallpaper](wallpaper.html).
@@ -144,10 +148,11 @@ a [treatise](treatise.html) on
 [We played those games too](weplayedthosegamestoo.html).
 
 [When I’m sorry I wash dishes](when-im-sorry-i.html) in
-the [window](window.html), thinking about \
+the [window](window.html), thinking \
+about
 [words and meaning](words-meaning.html).
 I feel [worse, \
 looking over](worse-looking-over.html) at you,
-than when I'm [writing](writing.html)
+than when I'm [writing](writing.html) \
 an [x-ray](x-ray.html) in
 [yellow](yellow.html).