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author | Case Duckworth | 2015-02-27 15:51:11 -0700 |
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committer | Case Duckworth | 2015-02-27 15:51:11 -0700 |
commit | f402a2b6d43a0411028b14a19cb449a7da0f5314 (patch) | |
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parent | Revise Riptide of memory (diff) | |
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Change line breaks to sentences in prose pieces
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18 | link: writing | 18 | link: writing |
19 | ... | 19 | ... |
20 | 20 | ||
21 | While chopping a tree in the woods with his hatchet (a Christmas gift from his | 21 | While chopping a tree in the woods with his hatchet (a Christmas gift from his mother) a bird he'd never heard before cried out. |
22 | mother) a bird he'd never heard before cried out. He jerked his head up and | 22 | He jerked his head up and to the right as the hatchet fell down and to the left. |
23 | to the right as the hatchet fell down and to the left. It cut deep into the | 23 | It cut deep into the back of his left hand. |
24 | back of his left hand. A low thud didn't echo in the forest because all the | 24 | A low thud didn't echo in the forest because all the needles and snow absorbed ~~sound well~~ the sound. |
25 | needles and snow absorbed ~~sound well~~ the sound. | ||
26 | 25 | ||
27 | When he got back to the house his hand wrapped in the end of his shirt he | 26 | When he got back to the house his hand wrapped in the end of his shirt he still felt no pain. |
28 | still felt no pain. He called for his mother and found her watching TV in the | 27 | He called for his mother and found her watching TV in the main room. |
29 | main room. He stayed in the kitchen not wanting to get blood on the carpet. | 28 | He stayed in the kitchen not wanting to get blood on the carpet. |
30 | She turned around cigarette dangling from her open mouth said "Oh god what | 29 | She turned around cigarette dangling from her open mouth said "Oh god what happened." |
31 | happened." | ||
32 | 30 | ||
33 | She drove him to the hospital in the car. The radio stayed off the entire | 31 | She drove him to the hospital in the car. |
34 | way. Paul wanted to turn it on but ~~he didn't want~~ the desire not to annoy | 32 | The radio stayed off the entire way. |
35 | his mother was stronger. They drove in silence. | 33 | Paul wanted to turn it on but ~~he didn't want~~ the desire not to annoy his mother was stronger. |
34 | They drove in silence. | ||
36 | 35 | ||
37 | At the hospital after the X-rays and stitching and pain medication | 36 | At the hospital after the X-rays and stitching and pain medication prescription the doctor said "You got lucky, son. |
38 | prescription the doctor said "You got lucky, son. If that axe had hit a | 37 | If that axe had hit a half-inch lower you'd have lost your hand. |
39 | half-inch lower you'd have lost your hand. You won't get full mobility back | 38 | You won't get full mobility back because we had to tie the tendons, but with therapy you should be able to work it pretty well." |
40 | because we had to tie the tendons, but with therapy you should be able to work | ||
41 | it pretty well." | ||
42 | 39 | ||
43 | On the drive back home all he could think was that he was glad he didn't hit | 40 | On the drive back home all he could think was that he was glad he didn't hit his writing hand. |
44 | his writing hand. | ||