1 files changed, 6 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/elegyforanalternateself.txt b/elegyforanalternateself.txt
index ae6f614..16447f7 100644
--- a/elegyforanalternateself.txt
+++ b/elegyforanalternateself.txt

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ project:
 | Say there are no words.  Say that we are conjoined
 | from birth, or better still, say we are myself.
-| ---But I still talk to myself, I build my world
+| ---But I still talk to myself, I [build my world][]
 | through language, so if we say there are [no words][]
 | this is not enough.  Say we are instead some animal,
 | or better yet, [a plant][], or a flagellum motoring
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ project:
 | and then there's me is wrong.  Each thing is separate:
 | [there is no whole in the world][].  Say this is both good
 | and bad, or rather, say there is no good or bad but only
-| being, more and more of it always added, none taken out
+| being, [more and more of it always added][], none taken out
 | though it can be forgotten.  Say that forgetting
-| is a function of our remembering.  (Say that humans only
+| is a [function of our remembering][].  (Say that humans only
 | [worry about separation][].  Say that only humans feel it.)
 [no words]: hymnal.html
@@ -31,3 +31,6 @@ project:
 [only things that worry]: movingsideways.html
 [there is no whole in the world]: i-wanted-to-tell-you-something.html
 [worry about separation]: swansong-alt.html
+[build my world]: i-am.html
+[more and more of it always added]: no-nothing.html
+[function of our remembering]: collage-instrument.html

diff --git a/elegyforanalternateself.txt b/elegyforanalternateself.txt index ae6f614..16447f7 100644 --- a/elegyforanalternateself.txt +++ b/elegyforanalternateself.txt
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ project:
10		10
11	\| Say there are no words. Say that we are conjoined	11	\| Say there are no words. Say that we are conjoined
12	\| from birth, or better still, say we are myself.	12	\| from birth, or better still, say we are myself.
13	\| ---But I still talk to myself, I build my world	13	\| ---But I still talk to myself, I [build my world][]
14	\| through language, so if we say there are [no words][]	14	\| through language, so if we say there are [no words][]
15	\| this is not enough. Say we are instead some animal,	15	\| this is not enough. Say we are instead some animal,
16	\| or better yet, [a plant][], or a flagellum motoring	16	\| or better yet, [a plant][], or a flagellum motoring
@@ -21,9 +21,9 @@ project:
21	\| and then there's me is wrong. Each thing is separate:	21	\| and then there's me is wrong. Each thing is separate:
22	\| [there is no whole in the world][]. Say this is both good	22	\| [there is no whole in the world][]. Say this is both good
23	\| and bad, or rather, say there is no good or bad but only	23	\| and bad, or rather, say there is no good or bad but only
24	\| being, more and more of it always added, none taken out	24	\| being, [more and more of it always added][], none taken out
25	\| though it can be forgotten. Say that forgetting	25	\| though it can be forgotten. Say that forgetting
26	\| is a function of our remembering. (Say that humans only	26	\| is a [function of our remembering][]. (Say that humans only
27	\| [worry about separation][]. Say that only humans feel it.)	27	\| [worry about separation][]. Say that only humans feel it.)
28		28
29	[no words]: hymnal.html	29	[no words]: hymnal.html
@@ -31,3 +31,6 @@ project:
31	[only things that worry]: movingsideways.html	31	[only things that worry]: movingsideways.html
32	[there is no whole in the world]: i-wanted-to-tell-you-something.html	32	[there is no whole in the world]: i-wanted-to-tell-you-something.html
33	[worry about separation]: swansong-alt.html	33	[worry about separation]: swansong-alt.html
		34	[build my world]: i-am.html
		35	[more and more of it always added]: no-nothing.html
		36	[function of our remembering]: collage-instrument.html