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1 | somewhere | ||
2 | i | ||
3 | remember | ||
4 | reading | ||
5 | advice | ||
6 | for | ||
7 | beginning | ||
8 | writers | ||
9 | not | ||
10 | to | ||
11 | show | ||
12 | their | ||
13 | work | ||
14 | to | ||
15 | anyone | ||
16 | at | ||
17 | least | ||
18 | that | ||
19 | in | ||
20 | the | ||
21 | early | ||
22 | stages | ||
23 | the | ||
24 | author | ||
25 | argued | ||
26 | that | ||
27 | it | ||
28 | took | ||
29 | all | ||
30 | of | ||
31 | the | ||
32 | power | ||
33 | out | ||
34 | of | ||
35 | the | ||
36 | idea | ||
37 | like | ||
38 | a | ||
39 | pressure-release | ||
40 | valve | ||
41 | before | ||
42 | any | ||
43 | of | ||
44 | that | ||
45 | creative | ||
46 | power | ||
47 | got | ||
48 | to | ||
49 | be | ||
50 | applied | ||
51 | to | ||
52 | the | ||
53 | page | ||
54 | it | ||
55 | made | ||
56 | me | ||
57 | think | ||
58 | of | ||
59 | meditation | ||
60 | at | ||
61 | legunitas | ||
62 | when | ||
63 | hass | ||
64 | writes | ||
65 | that | ||
66 | each | ||
67 | particular | ||
68 | erases | ||
69 | / | ||
70 | the | ||
71 | luminous | ||
72 | clarity | ||
73 | of | ||
74 | a | ||
75 | general | ||
76 | idea | ||
77 | as | ||
78 | a | ||
79 | self-confessed | ||
80 | general | ||
81 | idea | ||
82 | person | ||
83 | i | ||
84 | identify | ||
85 | with | ||
86 | the | ||
87 | remark | ||
88 | it | ||
89 | does | ||
90 | seem | ||
91 | as | ||
92 | though | ||
93 | no | ||
94 | matter | ||
95 | how | ||
96 | lofty | ||
97 | the | ||
98 | idea | ||
99 | i | ||
100 | originally | ||
101 | have | ||
102 | for | ||
103 | a | ||
104 | poem | ||
105 | once | ||
106 | i | ||
107 | sit | ||
108 | down | ||
109 | to | ||
110 | write | ||
111 | the | ||
112 | thing | ||
113 | i | ||
114 | quickly | ||
115 | get | ||
116 | bogged | ||
117 | down | ||
118 | in | ||
119 | the | ||
120 | details | ||
121 | the | ||
122 | particulars | ||
123 | i | ||
124 | guess | ||
125 | the | ||
126 | writer | ||
127 | of | ||
128 | that | ||
129 | lost | ||
130 | article | ||
131 | must | ||
132 | work | ||
133 | the | ||
134 | same | ||
135 | way | ||
136 | leading | ||
137 | to | ||
138 | their | ||
139 | advice | ||
140 | if | ||
141 | the | ||
142 | luminous | ||
143 | clarity | ||
144 | of | ||
145 | a | ||
146 | general | ||
147 | idea | ||
148 | is | ||
149 | so | ||
150 | fragile | ||
151 | that | ||
152 | just | ||
153 | beginning | ||
154 | to | ||
155 | write | ||
156 | it | ||
157 | down | ||
158 | ruins | ||
159 | it | ||
160 | somehow | ||
161 | telling | ||
162 | people | ||
163 | about | ||
164 | it | ||
165 | is | ||
166 | even | ||
167 | worse | ||
168 | but | ||
169 | back | ||
170 | to | ||
171 | that | ||
172 | robert | ||
173 | hass | ||
174 | poem | ||
175 | while | ||
176 | he | ||
177 | does | ||
178 | say | ||
179 | that | ||
180 | thing | ||
181 | about | ||
182 | the | ||
183 | luminous | ||
184 | clarity | ||
185 | of | ||
186 | a | ||
187 | general | ||
188 | idea | ||
189 | and | ||
190 | he | ||
191 | adds | ||
192 | to | ||
193 | it | ||
194 | that | ||
195 | a | ||
196 | word | ||
197 | is | ||
198 | elegy | ||
199 | to | ||
200 | what | ||
201 | it | ||
202 | signifies | ||
203 | his | ||
204 | tone | ||
205 | is | ||
206 | lightly | ||
207 | chiding | ||
208 | this | ||
209 | philosophy | ||
210 | he | ||
211 | opens | ||
212 | his | ||
213 | poem | ||
214 | with | ||
215 | all | ||
216 | the | ||
217 | new | ||
218 | thinking | ||
219 | is | ||
220 | about | ||
221 | loss | ||
222 | / | ||
223 | in | ||
224 | this | ||
225 | it | ||
226 | resembles | ||
227 | all | ||
228 | the | ||
229 | old | ||
230 | thinking | ||
231 | which | ||
232 | to | ||
233 | my | ||
234 | mind | ||
235 | lampoons | ||
236 | both | ||
237 | the | ||
238 | new | ||
239 | and | ||
240 | the | ||
241 | old | ||
242 | thinking | ||
243 | for | ||
244 | not | ||
245 | having | ||
246 | anything | ||
247 | new | ||
248 | ultimately | ||
249 | to | ||
250 | say | ||
251 | he | ||
252 | attributes | ||
253 | these | ||
254 | thoughts | ||
255 | to | ||
256 | a | ||
257 | friend | ||
258 | whose | ||
259 | voice | ||
260 | carried | ||
261 | a | ||
262 | thin | ||
263 | wire | ||
264 | of | ||
265 | grief | ||
266 | a | ||
267 | tone | ||
268 | / | ||
269 | almost | ||
270 | querulous | ||
271 | about | ||
272 | that | ||
273 | loss | ||
274 | of | ||
275 | luminous | ||
276 | clarity | ||
277 | the | ||
278 | speaker | ||
279 | of | ||
280 | hass's | ||
281 | poem | ||
282 | remembers | ||
283 | a | ||
284 | woman | ||
285 | he | ||
286 | made | ||
287 | love | ||
288 | to | ||
289 | once | ||
290 | and | ||
291 | this | ||
292 | image | ||
293 | takes | ||
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295 | the | ||
296 | poem | ||
297 | in | ||
298 | all | ||
299 | its | ||
300 | specificity | ||
301 | from | ||
302 | her | ||
303 | small | ||
304 | shoulders | ||
305 | to | ||
306 | his | ||
307 | childhood | ||
308 | river | ||
309 | / | ||
310 | with | ||
311 | its | ||
312 | island | ||
313 | willows | ||
314 | to | ||
315 | the | ||
316 | way | ||
317 | her | ||
318 | hands | ||
319 | dismantled | ||
320 | bread | ||
321 | even | ||
322 | in | ||
323 | disproving | ||
324 | his | ||
325 | friend's | ||
326 | remarks | ||
327 | through | ||
328 | his | ||
329 | imagery | ||
330 | the | ||
331 | speaker | ||
332 | of | ||
333 | meditation | ||
334 | at | ||
335 | legunitas | ||
336 | admits | ||
337 | that | ||
338 | it | ||
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340 | had | ||
341 | to | ||
342 | do | ||
343 | with | ||
344 | her | ||
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346 | here | ||
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348 | the | ||
349 | heart | ||
350 | of | ||
351 | what | ||
352 | hass | ||
353 | is | ||
354 | saying | ||
355 | about | ||
356 | poetry | ||
357 | a | ||
358 | poem | ||
359 | hardly | ||
360 | has | ||
361 | to | ||
362 | do | ||
363 | with | ||
364 | what | ||
365 | it's | ||
366 | written | ||
367 | about | ||
368 | on | ||
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373 | richard | ||
374 | hugo | ||
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376 | it | ||
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379 | famous | ||
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382 | poem | ||
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384 | a | ||
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388 | it | ||
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390 | a | ||
391 | real | ||
392 | or | ||
393 | generated | ||
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395 | which | ||
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397 | hugo | ||
398 | in | ||
399 | meditation | ||
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403 | something | ||
404 | about | ||
405 | the | ||
406 | way | ||
407 | that | ||
408 | not | ||
409 | only | ||
410 | general | ||
411 | ideas | ||
412 | but | ||
413 | particulars | ||
414 | such | ||
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418 | or | ||
419 | hands | ||
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427 | hurt | ||
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431 | such | ||
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436 | is | ||
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439 | a | ||
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441 | truth | ||
442 | are | ||
443 | luminous | ||
444 | to | ||
445 | poetry | ||
446 | and | ||
447 | to | ||
448 | life-as-lived | ||
449 | the | ||
450 | philosophers | ||
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452 | say | ||
453 | what | ||
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455 | want | ||
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579 | / | ||
580 | get | ||
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584 | utterance | ||
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