about summary refs log tree commit diff stats
path: root/src/on-genre-dimension.txt
diff options
context:
space:
mode:
authorCase Duckworth2015-03-25 21:49:45 -0700
committerCase Duckworth2015-03-25 21:54:26 -0700
commitecda49e0b20ad3bd52449356dccf2f8095ecfb70 (patch)
tree4789dd035fa827edf280fd8234d014b171de1c38 /src/on-genre-dimension.txt
parentFix makefile re: RIVER crashing (diff)
downloadautocento-ecda49e0b20ad3bd52449356dccf2f8095ecfb70.tar.gz
autocento-ecda49e0b20ad3bd52449356dccf2f8095ecfb70.zip
Flatten directory structure
All content files (*.txt, *.html, *.river) are now in /.
I did this to simplify the compilation step, and to make
linking easier.  I'm still thinking about whether I should
move the contents of js/, img/, and lua/ into /, or into
an 'assets' folder of some sort.  We'll see.
Diffstat (limited to 'src/on-genre-dimension.txt')
-rw-r--r--src/on-genre-dimension.txt91
1 files changed, 0 insertions, 91 deletions
diff --git a/src/on-genre-dimension.txt b/src/on-genre-dimension.txt deleted file mode 100644 index 088b489..0000000 --- a/src/on-genre-dimension.txt +++ /dev/null
@@ -1,91 +0,0 @@
1---
2title: On genre and the dimensionality of poetry
3id: on-genre-dimension
4genre: prose
5
6project:
7 title: Autocento of the breakfast table
8 class: autocento
9...
10
11How does one describe a poem?
12
13A genre is a set of creative outputs that fit a given set of criteria.
14Genres are useful as a sort of shorthand when describing a thing of art: instead of noting, for example, all of the objects depicted in a still-life that aren't people or land-features, we call it a still-life and get on to describing how the objects interrelate to each other on the canvas.
15If you ask me what kind of painting I'm working on, and I say, "a still-life," you have an expectation of certain elements the painting will contain.
16If you happen to be an agent and try to sell the painting later, you'll say to your prospective buyers, "It's a still-life," and whether the buyer is over the phone or standing in the gallery, they'll know whether they'll like it or not based on whether they like still-lifes.
17In the same way, they can call you up and ask if you have any still-lifes for sale right now, and get a simple yes-or-no answer for it.
18This is the first kind of genre, and it applies well within separate types of fundamentally-different media, such as painting, sculpture, film, or the written word.
19
20A poem, obviously, is in this last category, and for some reason its designation is hairier than others'.
21People refer to all sorts of art, or even dispassionate events, as poetry; dancing is called "poetry in motion," for example.
22I think the confusion is caused in part by the nature of writing as a medium, namely in that it captures thoughts more clearly and communicably than other art forms.
23While a picture can be "worth a thousand words," as the old cliché goes, when those words are actually written out they can contain shades of meaning impossible to capture in the picture itself, at least as quickly as they can be absorbed in writing.
24It seems as though writing is akin to the fundamental nature of thought, or at least of spoken language, which our thought is steeped in.
25
26So we know what _writing_ is.
27What is a _poem_?
28Especially in a world with such forms as prose poetry, flash fiction, short-shorts, lyrical essays, [lyrical _ballads_][], et cetera, what makes a poem a poem?
29
30I read an essay once that lamented the unidimensionality of writing.
31It posited that prose is really just a long, wrapped line of text that's bound by time---when you read a novel, for example, you really must start at the beginning and read through to the end, in order.
32Some newer forms of fiction are changing this, such as the Choose-Your-Own-Adventure genre in the 1970s and 80s, or hyperfiction found online, which raises the question for me if these newer forms could be considered on some level to be poetry.
33
34This is because poetry has more than one dimension, due to its linear nature---those line breaks are intentional, and the poem can't just fit into any-sized book or web page.
35If prose is a liquid, filling any container it's placed in with a constant volume, poetry is more like a crystallized form of prose, or to put it another way, poetry has between [one and two dimensions][].
36I wouldn't say that poetry has fully two dimensions, except for some of the more conceptually visual stuff that I'd call a word-picture anyway, because from line to line that unidimensionality of prose remains.
37Poetry has a higher dimensionality than prose, though, because it's crystallized there on the page; this fractal-dimensionality of poetry has interesting side effects on the genre itself.
38
39For one thing, poetry isn't as bound by time as prose is.
40It can, as Marianne Boruch writes, resist "narrative sequence," or "the forward press of _time_ itself," due to its repetitions and diversions, which are in turn made possible or more apparent by its line breaks.
41It's able to meditate on a subject, or expand on it lyrically, exploring the emotions connected with the images in the poem, or the connections between images.
42Through repitition of sounds, the poem builds meaning through resonance and rhyming, something that's harder to do in prose.
43Take, for example, the first lines of "[The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock][]:"
44
45> LET us go then, you and I, \
46> When the evening is spread out against the sky \
47> Like a patient etherized upon a table; \
48> Let us go, through certain half-deserted streets, \
49> The muttering retreats \
50> Of restless nights in one-night cheap hotels \
51> And sawdust restaurants with oyster-shells: \
52> Streets that follow like a tedious argument \
53> Of insidious intent \
54> To lead you to an overwhelming question.... \
55> Oh, do not ask, "What is it?" \
56> Let us go and make our visit.
57
58And here it is again, without line breaks:
59
60> LET us go then, you and I,
61> when the evening is spread out against the sky
62> like a patient etherized upon a table;
63> let us go, through certain half-deserted streets,
64> the muttering retreats
65> of restless nights in one-night cheap hotels
66> and sawdust restaurants with oyster-shells:
67> streets that follow like a tedious argument
68> of insidious intent
69> to lead you to an overwhelming question....
70> Oh, do not ask, "What is it?"
71> Let us go and make our visit.
72
73The end-rhymes that do so much for the sound of the poem are gone, and so part of the meaning of the poem---its obsessive self-consciousness, its paranoia---are gone as well.
74Additionally, line breaks act as punctuation in the entirety of this [fragment][]; without them, the meaning becomes obscured in the long first sentence of the poem.
75
76Perhaps due to this dwelling on scene, or on all aspects of a single scene at one time, poetry tends to be heavy on images, or lyrical.
77I think this is what's generally meant when someone describes a dance as "poetic," or a story or anything else: I think they really mean "lyrical," or maybe "beautiful." The images form sort of a narrative as the reader moves through them, as Cesare Pavese says, that's nevertheless [different than a traditional narrative][]: this "image narrative" jumps from image to image not by a logical progression but by the resonances between the images that run underneath them, on almost a subliminal plane.
78Almost without noticing, the reader of a poem is taken on an emotional journey that's not necessarily connected to the images of the poem, themselves.
79
80Poetry is a manipulation of emotion, or a communication of it.
81Prose has the space, the time to describe what's going on, even if the author stands by the old adage of "show, don't tell."
82_Showing_ in prose inherently involves more telling than poetry does, as poetry communicates a feeling itself.
83This definition may be broad enough to include certain dance performances or paintings, but that's okay.
84I'm of the opinion that the more useful genre distinctions are those which describe the thing technically: _verse_, for example, or _lyrical_.
85_Poetry_ is almost a value judgement, and that makes me a little uncomfortable.
86
87[lyrical _ballads_]: http://www.bartleby.com/39/36.html
88[one and two dimensions]: http://www.vanderbilt.edu/AnS/psychology/cogsci/chaos/workshop/Fractals.html
89[The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock]: http://www.bartleby.com/198/1.html
90[fragment]: statements-frag.html
91[different than a traditional narrative]: http://numerocinqmagazine.com/2011/03/07/translation-adaptation-and-transformation-the-poet-as-translator-an-essay-by-richard-jackson/