1 files changed, 17 insertions, 19 deletions
diff --git a/src/cereal.txt b/src/cereal.txt
index 8a2ba8e..b353644 100644
--- a/src/cereal.txt
+++ b/src/cereal.txt

@@ -18,26 +18,24 @@ project:
      link: building
 ...
-He woke up after eleven and didn't go outside all day, not even to his Writing
+He woke up after eleven and didn't go outside all day, not even to his Writing Shack.
-Shack.  What did he do?
+What did he do?
 He watched late morning cartoons meant for children too young to go to school.
-He ate bowls of cereal.  He watched his mother play dominoes.  He played
+He ate bowls of cereal.
-dominoes with her for a little while until she was winning by such a margin it
+He watched his mother play dominoes.
-wasn't fun for either of them.  He went down to the basement to do his
+He played dominoes with her for a little while until she was winning by such a margin it wasn't fun for either of them.
-laundry.  He pulled the chain for the light and it turned on like magic.
+He went down to the basement to do his laundry.
-"Electricity is like magic" he said to himself.  He thought he would like to
+He pulled the chain for the light and it turned on like magic.
-write that down but his Implements were in the Shack.  He'd already built up
+"Electricity is like magic" he said to himself.
-so much momentum inside.
+He thought he would like to write that down but his Implements were in the Shack.
+He'd already built up so much momentum inside.
-Inertia?  he thought.  "What's the difference between inertia and momentum" he
+Inertia? he thought.
-asked himself as he hefted dirty clothes into the washer.  "Maybe inertia is
+"What's the difference between inertia and momentum" he asked himself as he hefted dirty clothes into the washer.
-the momentum of not moving" he thought as he measured and poured the blue
+"Maybe inertia is the momentum of not moving" he thought as he measured and poured the blue detergent into the drum.
-detergent into the drum.  "Momentum is the inertia of moving forward through
+"Momentum is the inertia of moving forward through time" as he selected WARM-COLD on the dial and pulled it out to start the machine.
-time" as he selected WARM-COLD on the dial and pulled it out to start the
+"What do you think is the difference between inertia and momentum" he asked his mother when he opened the door at the top of the stairs.
-machine.  "What do you think is the difference between inertia and momentum"
-he asked his mother when he opened the door at the top of the stairs.
-"When you switch over your laundry could you bring up my underwear from the
+"When you switch over your laundry could you bring up my underwear from the dryer" she asked not looking up from her dominoes.
-dryer" she asked not looking up from her dominoes.  A thread of smoke curled
+A thread of smoke curled from her cigarette and spread out on the ceiling.
-from her cigarette and spread out on the ceiling.

diff --git a/src/cereal.txt b/src/cereal.txt index 8a2ba8e..b353644 100644 --- a/src/cereal.txt +++ b/src/cereal.txt
@@ -18,26 +18,24 @@ project:
18	link: building	18	link: building
19	...	19	...
20		20
21	He woke up after eleven and didn't go outside all day, not even to his Writing	21	He woke up after eleven and didn't go outside all day, not even to his Writing Shack.
22	Shack. What did he do?	22	What did he do?
23		23
24	He watched late morning cartoons meant for children too young to go to school.	24	He watched late morning cartoons meant for children too young to go to school.
25	He ate bowls of cereal. He watched his mother play dominoes. He played	25	He ate bowls of cereal.
26	dominoes with her for a little while until she was winning by such a margin it	26	He watched his mother play dominoes.
27	wasn't fun for either of them. He went down to the basement to do his	27	He played dominoes with her for a little while until she was winning by such a margin it wasn't fun for either of them.
28	laundry. He pulled the chain for the light and it turned on like magic.	28	He went down to the basement to do his laundry.
29	"Electricity is like magic" he said to himself. He thought he would like to	29	He pulled the chain for the light and it turned on like magic.
30	write that down but his Implements were in the Shack. He'd already built up	30	"Electricity is like magic" he said to himself.
31	so much momentum inside.	31	He thought he would like to write that down but his Implements were in the Shack.
		32	He'd already built up so much momentum inside.
32		33
33	Inertia? he thought. "What's the difference between inertia and momentum" he	34	Inertia? he thought.
34	asked himself as he hefted dirty clothes into the washer. "Maybe inertia is	35	"What's the difference between inertia and momentum" he asked himself as he hefted dirty clothes into the washer.
35	the momentum of not moving" he thought as he measured and poured the blue	36	"Maybe inertia is the momentum of not moving" he thought as he measured and poured the blue detergent into the drum.
36	detergent into the drum. "Momentum is the inertia of moving forward through	37	"Momentum is the inertia of moving forward through time" as he selected WARM-COLD on the dial and pulled it out to start the machine.
37	time" as he selected WARM-COLD on the dial and pulled it out to start the	38	"What do you think is the difference between inertia and momentum" he asked his mother when he opened the door at the top of the stairs.
38	machine. "What do you think is the difference between inertia and momentum"
39	he asked his mother when he opened the door at the top of the stairs.
40		39
41	"When you switch over your laundry could you bring up my underwear from the	40	"When you switch over your laundry could you bring up my underwear from the dryer" she asked not looking up from her dominoes.
42	dryer" she asked not looking up from her dominoes. A thread of smoke curled	41	A thread of smoke curled from her cigarette and spread out on the ceiling.
43	from her cigarette and spread out on the ceiling.