1 files changed, 15 insertions, 10 deletions

@@ -18,11 +18,12 @@ project:
       link: cereal
 ...
 
-It had gotten cold.  He went to lay down in bed with a pad and paper.  He
-began to write.  Although he hadn't tried it much in bed before, he liked it
-mostly.  His arm got tired journeying across the page like a series of
-switchbacks down the wall of the Grand Canyon.  He wrote this down in the
-margin, for later:
+It had gotten cold.
+He went to lay down in bed with a pad and paper.
+He began to write.
+Although he hadn't tried it much in bed before, he liked it mostly.
+His arm got tired journeying across the page like a series of switchbacks down the wall of the Grand Canyon.
+He wrote this down in the margin, for later:
 
 ```hand
 Arm journeying across \
@@ -32,12 +33,16 @@ backs down the wall \
 of the Grand Canyon \
 ```
 
-His arm began to pain him.  He adjusted his position in the bed.  It didn't
-help much with the pain.  It still hurt as he wrote.  He began to be
-distracted by his mother's music playing in the next room.
+His arm began to pain him.
+He adjusted his position in the bed.
+It didn't help much with the pain.
+It still hurt as he wrote.
+He began to be distracted by his mother's music playing in the next room.
 
 "Could you turn that down please" he hollered across the wall to his mother.
-She made no reply (music too loud).  He gave his arm a break to look at what
-he'd written.  He couldn't make heads or tails of it.  It looked like Arabic.
+She made no reply (music too loud).
+He gave his arm a break to look at what he'd written.
+He couldn't make heads or tails of it.
+It looked like Arabic.
 
 He woke up gasping in a sweat.