1 files changed, 9 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/src/notes.txt b/src/notes.txt
index 024d18b..d43c123 100644
--- a/src/notes.txt
+++ b/src/notes.txt

@@ -18,15 +18,16 @@ project:
      link: man
 ...
-Paul began typing on notecards.  Somehow this felt right to his sensibilities.
+Paul began typing on notecards.
-It was difficult to get the little cards into the typewriter.  It was a pain
+Somehow this felt right to his sensibilities.
-to readjust the typewriter for regular paper when he wasn't writing.  He
+It was difficult to get the little cards into the typewriter.
-started typing everything on those little notecards: grocery lists, letters to
+It was a pain to readjust the typewriter for regular paper when he wasn't writing.
-his grandmother, even reports for work (which is what got him in trouble).
+He started typing everything on those little notecards: grocery lists, letters to his grandmother, even reports for work (which is what got him in trouble).
-But this was all later.  For now he was writing his ideas, "notes" he now
+But this was all later.
-called them, something for him to combine later into something.  He didn't
+For now he was writing his ideas, "notes" he now called them, something for him to combine later into something.
-like to think about it.  On this particular cold winter morning, he wrote
+He didn't like to think about it.
+On this particular cold winter morning, he wrote
 ```type
 Woke up from a dream I was famous.

diff --git a/src/notes.txt b/src/notes.txt index 024d18b..d43c123 100644 --- a/src/notes.txt +++ b/src/notes.txt
@@ -18,15 +18,16 @@ project:
18	link: man	18	link: man
19	...	19	...
20		20
21	Paul began typing on notecards. Somehow this felt right to his sensibilities.	21	Paul began typing on notecards.
22	It was difficult to get the little cards into the typewriter. It was a pain	22	Somehow this felt right to his sensibilities.
23	to readjust the typewriter for regular paper when he wasn't writing. He	23	It was difficult to get the little cards into the typewriter.
24	started typing everything on those little notecards: grocery lists, letters to	24	It was a pain to readjust the typewriter for regular paper when he wasn't writing.
25	his grandmother, even reports for work (which is what got him in trouble).	25	He started typing everything on those little notecards: grocery lists, letters to his grandmother, even reports for work (which is what got him in trouble).
26		26
27	But this was all later. For now he was writing his ideas, "notes" he now	27	But this was all later.
28	called them, something for him to combine later into something. He didn't	28	For now he was writing his ideas, "notes" he now called them, something for him to combine later into something.
29	like to think about it. On this particular cold winter morning, he wrote	29	He didn't like to think about it.
		30	On this particular cold winter morning, he wrote
30		31
31	```type	32	```type
32	Woke up from a dream I was famous.	33	Woke up from a dream I was famous.