1 files changed, 16 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/src/shed.txt b/src/shed.txt
index f312cd4..abdab6b 100644
--- a/src/shed.txt
+++ b/src/shed.txt

@@ -18,18 +18,23 @@ project:
      link: sapling
 ...
-"What do you do all day in that shed out back" his mother asked one night
+"What do you do all day in that shed out back" his mother asked one night while they ate dinner in front of the TV.
-while they ate dinner in front of the TV.  "Write" he answered.  "Write what"
+"Write" he answered.
-she asked in that way that means he'd better not say I don't know.  "I don't
+"Write what" she asked in that way that means he'd better not say I don't know.
-know" he said.
+"I don't know" he said.
-"Goddammit Paul" his mother said.  "You're wasting your life out in that shed.
+"Goddammit Paul" his mother said.
-You need to go out and get---" "I chop down trees too" he said.  "I make
+"You're wasting your life out in that shed.
-furniture out of them."  His mother's face did a Hitchcock zoom as she
+You need to go out and get---"
-considered this new information.  "Is it any good" she asked, eyes narrowed.
+"I chop down trees too" he said.
+"I make furniture out of them."
+His mother's face did a Hitchcock zoom as she considered this new information.
+"Is it any good" she asked, eyes narrowed.
-"It's getting there" he answered.  "I'm getting better every day."  "When is
+"It's getting there" he answered.
-it going to be there" she asked.  "When are you going to sell this furniture
+"I'm getting better every day."
-of yours?"  "It'll be a while" he answered.
+"When is it going to be there" she asked.
+"When are you going to sell this furniture of yours?"
+"It'll be a while" he answered.
 "Then you'd better get a job until then" she said.

diff --git a/src/shed.txt b/src/shed.txt index f312cd4..abdab6b 100644 --- a/src/shed.txt +++ b/src/shed.txt
@@ -18,18 +18,23 @@ project:
18	link: sapling	18	link: sapling
19	...	19	...
20		20
21	"What do you do all day in that shed out back" his mother asked one night	21	"What do you do all day in that shed out back" his mother asked one night while they ate dinner in front of the TV.
22	while they ate dinner in front of the TV. "Write" he answered. "Write what"	22	"Write" he answered.
23	she asked in that way that means he'd better not say I don't know. "I don't	23	"Write what" she asked in that way that means he'd better not say I don't know.
24	know" he said.	24	"I don't know" he said.
25		25
26	"Goddammit Paul" his mother said. "You're wasting your life out in that shed.	26	"Goddammit Paul" his mother said.
27	You need to go out and get---" "I chop down trees too" he said. "I make	27	"You're wasting your life out in that shed.
28	furniture out of them." His mother's face did a Hitchcock zoom as she	28	You need to go out and get---"
29	considered this new information. "Is it any good" she asked, eyes narrowed.	29	"I chop down trees too" he said.
		30	"I make furniture out of them."
		31	His mother's face did a Hitchcock zoom as she considered this new information.
		32	"Is it any good" she asked, eyes narrowed.
30		33
31	"It's getting there" he answered. "I'm getting better every day." "When is	34	"It's getting there" he answered.
32	it going to be there" she asked. "When are you going to sell this furniture	35	"I'm getting better every day."
33	of yours?" "It'll be a while" he answered.	36	"When is it going to be there" she asked.
		37	"When are you going to sell this furniture of yours?"
		38	"It'll be a while" he answered.
34		39
35	"Then you'd better get a job until then" she said.	40	"Then you'd better get a job until then" she said.