1 files changed, 23 insertions, 19 deletions
diff --git a/src/snow.txt b/src/snow.txt
index 3bb250a..dda1ede 100644
--- a/src/snow.txt
+++ b/src/snow.txt

@@ -18,26 +18,30 @@ project:
      link: shed
 ...
-_I don't care if they burn_ he wrote on his last blank notecard.  He'd have to
+_I don't care if they burn_ he wrote on his last blank notecard.
-go to the Office Supply Store tomorrow after work.
+He'd have to go to the Office Supply Store tomorrow after work.
-He looked at what he'd written.  He'd been thinking about this for a while,
+He looked at what he'd written.
-felt the frustration build slowly like a thundercloud in the back of his mind.
+He'd been thinking about this for a while, felt the frustration build slowly like a thundercloud in the back of his mind.
-He thought he should write something else on the card, but everything he
+He thought he should write something else on the card, but everything he thought of seemed too confessional or too real compromising.
-thought of seemed too confessional or too real compromising.  He didn't want
+He didn't want anyone, not even the notecards, to know what he was thinking.
-anyone, not even the notecards, to know what he was thinking.  He decided to
+He decided to try for more of an interview with the paper.
-try for more of an interview with the paper.
-_Why?_  asked the notecard.  _Because there is nothing important on any of
+_Why?_  asked the notecard.
-them_ he wrote back.  _What do you mean?  You have some good stuff in that top
+_Because there is nothing important on any of them_ he wrote back.
-drawer there._  He looked in the top drawer.  It was stuffed full of notecards
+_What do you mean?
-in no organization.  He could see bits and pieces of thoughts like leaves
+You have some good stuff in that top drawer there._
-crunched underfoot in autumn.  _It will take so much organization_ he wrote.
+He looked in the top drawer.
+It was stuffed full of notecards in no organization.
+He could see bits and pieces of thoughts like leaves crunched underfoot in autumn.
+_It will take so much organization_ he wrote.
-_Why is organization important?  Remember the trees, how they formed rows
+_Why is organization important?
-without trying.  No matter how the ideas fall, they make something.  The snow
+Remember the trees, how they formed rows without trying.
-does that too_ he wrote.  _It doesn't try to make anything but it does._
+No matter how the ideas fall, they make something.
+The snow does that too_ he wrote.
+_It doesn't try to make anything but it does._
-_No the snow is different_ the notecard was annoyed.  _The snow is a blank
+_No the snow is different_ the notecard was annoyed.
-canvas that humans build into shapes or doppelgangers.  It makes nothing on
+_The snow is a blank canvas that humans build into shapes or doppelgangers.
-its own._
+It makes nothing on its own._

diff --git a/src/snow.txt b/src/snow.txt index 3bb250a..dda1ede 100644 --- a/src/snow.txt +++ b/src/snow.txt
@@ -18,26 +18,30 @@ project:
18	link: shed	18	link: shed
19	...	19	...
20		20
21	_I don't care if they burn_ he wrote on his last blank notecard. He'd have to	21	_I don't care if they burn_ he wrote on his last blank notecard.
22	go to the Office Supply Store tomorrow after work.	22	He'd have to go to the Office Supply Store tomorrow after work.
23		23
24	He looked at what he'd written. He'd been thinking about this for a while,	24	He looked at what he'd written.
25	felt the frustration build slowly like a thundercloud in the back of his mind.	25	He'd been thinking about this for a while, felt the frustration build slowly like a thundercloud in the back of his mind.
26	He thought he should write something else on the card, but everything he	26	He thought he should write something else on the card, but everything he thought of seemed too confessional or too real compromising.
27	thought of seemed too confessional or too real compromising. He didn't want	27	He didn't want anyone, not even the notecards, to know what he was thinking.
28	anyone, not even the notecards, to know what he was thinking. He decided to	28	He decided to try for more of an interview with the paper.
29	try for more of an interview with the paper.
30		29
31	_Why?_ asked the notecard. _Because there is nothing important on any of	30	_Why?_ asked the notecard.
32	them_ he wrote back. _What do you mean? You have some good stuff in that top	31	_Because there is nothing important on any of them_ he wrote back.
33	drawer there._ He looked in the top drawer. It was stuffed full of notecards	32	_What do you mean?
34	in no organization. He could see bits and pieces of thoughts like leaves	33	You have some good stuff in that top drawer there._
35	crunched underfoot in autumn. _It will take so much organization_ he wrote.	34	He looked in the top drawer.
		35	It was stuffed full of notecards in no organization.
		36	He could see bits and pieces of thoughts like leaves crunched underfoot in autumn.
		37	_It will take so much organization_ he wrote.
36		38
37	_Why is organization important? Remember the trees, how they formed rows	39	_Why is organization important?
38	without trying. No matter how the ideas fall, they make something. The snow	40	Remember the trees, how they formed rows without trying.
39	does that too_ he wrote. _It doesn't try to make anything but it does._	41	No matter how the ideas fall, they make something.
		42	The snow does that too_ he wrote.
		43	_It doesn't try to make anything but it does._
40		44
41	_No the snow is different_ the notecard was annoyed. _The snow is a blank	45	_No the snow is different_ the notecard was annoyed.
42	canvas that humans build into shapes or doppelgangers. It makes nothing on	46	_The snow is a blank canvas that humans build into shapes or doppelgangers.
43	its own._	47	It makes nothing on its own._