1 files changed, 28 insertions, 18 deletions
diff --git a/src/tapestry.txt b/src/tapestry.txt
index ab87e19..6909a8c 100644
--- a/src/tapestry.txt
+++ b/src/tapestry.txt

@@ -18,25 +18,35 @@ project:
      link: swear
 ...
-_Apparently typewriters need ribbon.  Apparently ribbon is incredibly hard to
+_Apparently typewriters need ribbon.
-find anymore because no one uses typewriters.  Apparently I am writing my
+Apparently ribbon is incredibly hard to find anymore because no one uses typewriters.
-hymns from now on._  So he was back to calling his notes "hymns."  He looked
+Apparently I am writing my hymns from now on._
-up "hymns" in the dictionary.  It said that a hymn was "an ode or song of
+So he was back to calling his notes "hymns."
-praise or adoration." Praise or adoration to what? he asked himself.  He
+He looked up "hymns" in the dictionary.
-thought maybe furniture.  There was still a lot of notfurniture in what he was
+It said that a hymn was "an ode or song of praise or adoration."
-again calling his Writing Shack.
+Praise or adoration to what? he asked himself.
+He thought maybe furniture.
+There was still a lot of notfurniture in what he was again calling his Writing Shack.
-The dictionary also had this to say about "hymn": that it was possibly related
+The dictionary also had this to say about "hymn": that it was possibly related to the old Greek word for "weave."
-to the old Greek word for "weave."  "Weave what" Paul wondered to himself.  He
+"Weave what" Paul wondered to himself.
-wrote this down on a new notecard.  _Apparently "hymn" means weave somehow.
+He wrote this down on a new notecard.
-Or it used to.  Or its cousin did. What is it weaving?  Who is it weaving for?
+_Apparently "hymn" means weave somehow.
-I remember in school we talked about Odysseus and his wife Penelope, who wove
+Or it used to.
-a tapestry every day just to take it apart at night.  I forget why._
+Or its cousin did.
+What is it weaving?
+Who is it weaving for?
+I remember in school we talked about Odysseus and his wife Penelope, who wove a tapestry every day just to take it apart at night.
+I forget why._
-_Maybe she wove the tapestry for Odysseus.  Maybe she wove it for herself.
+_Maybe she wove the tapestry for Odysseus.
-What did she weave it of?  Memory, maybe?  Or dream?  I think these words make
+Maybe she wove it for herself.
-a kind of tapestry, or at least the thread it will be made of.  I will weave a
+What did she weave it of?
-hymn to the gods of Literature, out of fiction. My furniture was a try at
+Memory, maybe?
-weaving, but I am shit at furniture.  So writing it is again._
+Or dream?
+I think these words make a kind of tapestry, or at least the thread it will be made of.
+I will weave a hymn to the gods of Literature, out of fiction.
+My furniture was a try at weaving, but I am shit at furniture.
+So writing it is again._
 He wrote _**NOTES FOR A HYMN**_ at the top of this notecard.

diff --git a/src/tapestry.txt b/src/tapestry.txt index ab87e19..6909a8c 100644 --- a/src/tapestry.txt +++ b/src/tapestry.txt
@@ -18,25 +18,35 @@ project:
18	link: swear	18	link: swear
19	...	19	...
20		20
21	_Apparently typewriters need ribbon. Apparently ribbon is incredibly hard to	21	_Apparently typewriters need ribbon.
22	find anymore because no one uses typewriters. Apparently I am writing my	22	Apparently ribbon is incredibly hard to find anymore because no one uses typewriters.
23	hymns from now on._ So he was back to calling his notes "hymns." He looked	23	Apparently I am writing my hymns from now on._
24	up "hymns" in the dictionary. It said that a hymn was "an ode or song of	24	So he was back to calling his notes "hymns."
25	praise or adoration." Praise or adoration to what? he asked himself. He	25	He looked up "hymns" in the dictionary.
26	thought maybe furniture. There was still a lot of notfurniture in what he was	26	It said that a hymn was "an ode or song of praise or adoration."
27	again calling his Writing Shack.	27	Praise or adoration to what? he asked himself.
		28	He thought maybe furniture.
		29	There was still a lot of notfurniture in what he was again calling his Writing Shack.
28		30
29	The dictionary also had this to say about "hymn": that it was possibly related	31	The dictionary also had this to say about "hymn": that it was possibly related to the old Greek word for "weave."
30	to the old Greek word for "weave." "Weave what" Paul wondered to himself. He	32	"Weave what" Paul wondered to himself.
31	wrote this down on a new notecard. _Apparently "hymn" means weave somehow.	33	He wrote this down on a new notecard.
32	Or it used to. Or its cousin did. What is it weaving? Who is it weaving for?	34	_Apparently "hymn" means weave somehow.
33	I remember in school we talked about Odysseus and his wife Penelope, who wove	35	Or it used to.
34	a tapestry every day just to take it apart at night. I forget why._	36	Or its cousin did.
		37	What is it weaving?
		38	Who is it weaving for?
		39	I remember in school we talked about Odysseus and his wife Penelope, who wove a tapestry every day just to take it apart at night.
		40	I forget why._
35		41
36	_Maybe she wove the tapestry for Odysseus. Maybe she wove it for herself.	42	_Maybe she wove the tapestry for Odysseus.
37	What did she weave it of? Memory, maybe? Or dream? I think these words make	43	Maybe she wove it for herself.
38	a kind of tapestry, or at least the thread it will be made of. I will weave a	44	What did she weave it of?
39	hymn to the gods of Literature, out of fiction. My furniture was a try at	45	Memory, maybe?
40	weaving, but I am shit at furniture. So writing it is again._	46	Or dream?
		47	I think these words make a kind of tapestry, or at least the thread it will be made of.
		48	I will weave a hymn to the gods of Literature, out of fiction.
		49	My furniture was a try at weaving, but I am shit at furniture.
		50	So writing it is again._
41		51
42	He wrote _NOTES FOR A HYMN_ at the top of this notecard.	52	He wrote _NOTES FOR A HYMN_ at the top of this notecard.