1 files changed, 12 insertions, 15 deletions
diff --git a/src/underwear.txt b/src/underwear.txt
index 7caedd9..952d7c3 100644
--- a/src/underwear.txt
+++ b/src/underwear.txt

@@ -18,23 +18,20 @@ project:
      link: treatise
 ...
-He dropped the penny in the dryer, turned it on, and turned around.  "What" he
+He dropped the penny in the dryer, turned it on, and turned around.
-called upstairs, pretending not to hear his mother's question over the noise
+"What" he called upstairs, pretending not to hear his mother's question over the noise of the dryer.
-of the dryer.  He had heard her ask "Could you bring up my underwear from the
+He had heard her ask "Could you bring up my underwear from the dryer" but didn't want to touch her underwear any more than he had to.
-dryer" but didn't want to touch her underwear any more than he had to.  "I
+"I don't want to bring up your underwear" he said to himself, and walked back upstairs as his mother was calling down again for her underwear.
-don't want to bring up your underwear" he said to himself, and walked back
-upstairs as his mother was calling down again for her underwear.
 "Did you get them" she asked when he opened the basement door to the kitchen.
-She was sitting at the table playing dominoes.  "Get what" he asked.  She
+She was sitting at the table playing dominoes.
-peered at him and said "my underwear."
+"Get what" he asked.
+She peered at him and said "my underwear."
-"Oh I didn't see them" he answered.  He reflexively opened the refrigerator,
+"Oh I didn't see them" he answered.
-reflexively bent down, reflexively tried to feign non-disappointment
+He reflexively opened the refrigerator, reflexively bent down, reflexively tried to feign non-disappointment (appointment? he thought) at seeing the same disappointing empty pickle jar, old head of lettuce, crusty mayonnaise he'd seen already on the way down to switch his laundry over.
-(appointment? he thought) at seeing the same disappointing empty pickle jar,
+"Paul" she said in that way that means Look at me.
-old head of lettuce, crusty mayonnaise he'd seen already on the way down to
-switch his laundry over.  "Paul" she said in that way that means Look at me.
 Paul looked at her.
-"You had to get them out of the dryer to put your clothes in.  Where did you
+"You had to get them out of the dryer to put your clothes in.
-put them?"
+Where did you put them?"

diff --git a/src/underwear.txt b/src/underwear.txt index 7caedd9..952d7c3 100644 --- a/src/underwear.txt +++ b/src/underwear.txt
@@ -18,23 +18,20 @@ project:
18	link: treatise	18	link: treatise
19	...	19	...
20		20
21	He dropped the penny in the dryer, turned it on, and turned around. "What" he	21	He dropped the penny in the dryer, turned it on, and turned around.
22	called upstairs, pretending not to hear his mother's question over the noise	22	"What" he called upstairs, pretending not to hear his mother's question over the noise of the dryer.
23	of the dryer. He had heard her ask "Could you bring up my underwear from the	23	He had heard her ask "Could you bring up my underwear from the dryer" but didn't want to touch her underwear any more than he had to.
24	dryer" but didn't want to touch her underwear any more than he had to. "I	24	"I don't want to bring up your underwear" he said to himself, and walked back upstairs as his mother was calling down again for her underwear.
25	don't want to bring up your underwear" he said to himself, and walked back
26	upstairs as his mother was calling down again for her underwear.
27		25
28	"Did you get them" she asked when he opened the basement door to the kitchen.	26	"Did you get them" she asked when he opened the basement door to the kitchen.
29	She was sitting at the table playing dominoes. "Get what" he asked. She	27	She was sitting at the table playing dominoes.
30	peered at him and said "my underwear."	28	"Get what" he asked.
		29	She peered at him and said "my underwear."
31		30
32	"Oh I didn't see them" he answered. He reflexively opened the refrigerator,	31	"Oh I didn't see them" he answered.
33	reflexively bent down, reflexively tried to feign non-disappointment	32	He reflexively opened the refrigerator, reflexively bent down, reflexively tried to feign non-disappointment (appointment? he thought) at seeing the same disappointing empty pickle jar, old head of lettuce, crusty mayonnaise he'd seen already on the way down to switch his laundry over.
34	(appointment? he thought) at seeing the same disappointing empty pickle jar,	33	"Paul" she said in that way that means Look at me.
35	old head of lettuce, crusty mayonnaise he'd seen already on the way down to
36	switch his laundry over. "Paul" she said in that way that means Look at me.
37	Paul looked at her.	34	Paul looked at her.
38		35
39	"You had to get them out of the dryer to put your clothes in. Where did you	36	"You had to get them out of the dryer to put your clothes in.
40	put them?"	37	Where did you put them?"