1 files changed, 13 insertions, 13 deletions
diff --git a/src/writing.txt b/src/writing.txt
index 4be9d0b..4dd5d48 100644
--- a/src/writing.txt
+++ b/src/writing.txt

@@ -18,18 +18,18 @@ project:
      link: window
 ...
-He sat down at his writing desk and removed his new pen from its plastic
+He sat down at his writing desk and removed his new pen from its plastic wrapping.
-wrapping.  He remembered how to fill it from _The View from Saturday_, which
+He remembered how to fill it from _The View from Saturday_, which he'd read as a kid.
-he'd read as a kid.  It had been one of his favorite books.  He remembered the
+It had been one of his favorite books.
-heart puzzle they completed, the origin of the word "posh," and most of all
+He remembered the heart puzzle they completed, the origin of the word "posh," and most of all his fourth-grade teacher [Ms. (Mrs? He could never remember)][ms] Samovar.
-his fourth-grade teacher Ms. (Mrs? He could never remember) Samovar.  He
+He smiled as he opened the lid on the ink well he'd just bought.
-smiled as he opened the lid on the ink well he'd just bought.
-He dipped his pen in the inkwell, screwed the converter piston up, and watched
+He dipped his pen in the inkwell, screwed the converter piston up, and watched as nothing entered the chamber.
-as nothing entered the chamber. He screwed it back down and up again, while
+He screwed it back down and up again, while dipping the nib more deeply into the ink well.
-dipping the nib more deeply into the ink well.  He watched as again nothing
+He watched as again nothing filled the capsule.
-filled the capsule.  He screwed it down a third time.  His thumb knocked the
+He screwed it down a third time.
-inkwell over somehow by accident.
+His thumb knocked the inkwell over somehow by accident.
-As he swore, stood up and away from the table, and went into the house proper
+As he swore, stood up and away from the table, and went into the house proper for paper towels, he resolved to buy a typewriter.
-for paper towels, he resolved to buy a typewriter.
+[ms]: telemarketer.html

diff --git a/src/writing.txt b/src/writing.txt index 4be9d0b..4dd5d48 100644 --- a/src/writing.txt +++ b/src/writing.txt
@@ -18,18 +18,18 @@ project:
18	link: window	18	link: window
19	...	19	...
20		20
21	He sat down at his writing desk and removed his new pen from its plastic	21	He sat down at his writing desk and removed his new pen from its plastic wrapping.
22	wrapping. He remembered how to fill it from _The View from Saturday_, which	22	He remembered how to fill it from _The View from Saturday_, which he'd read as a kid.
23	he'd read as a kid. It had been one of his favorite books. He remembered the	23	It had been one of his favorite books.
24	heart puzzle they completed, the origin of the word "posh," and most of all	24	He remembered the heart puzzle they completed, the origin of the word "posh," and most of all his fourth-grade teacher [Ms. (Mrs? He could never remember)][ms] Samovar.
25	his fourth-grade teacher Ms. (Mrs? He could never remember) Samovar. He	25	He smiled as he opened the lid on the ink well he'd just bought.
26	smiled as he opened the lid on the ink well he'd just bought.
27		26
28	He dipped his pen in the inkwell, screwed the converter piston up, and watched	27	He dipped his pen in the inkwell, screwed the converter piston up, and watched as nothing entered the chamber.
29	as nothing entered the chamber. He screwed it back down and up again, while	28	He screwed it back down and up again, while dipping the nib more deeply into the ink well.
30	dipping the nib more deeply into the ink well. He watched as again nothing	29	He watched as again nothing filled the capsule.
31	filled the capsule. He screwed it down a third time. His thumb knocked the	30	He screwed it down a third time.
32	inkwell over somehow by accident.	31	His thumb knocked the inkwell over somehow by accident.
33		32
34	As he swore, stood up and away from the table, and went into the house proper	33	As he swore, stood up and away from the table, and went into the house proper for paper towels, he resolved to buy a typewriter.
35	for paper towels, he resolved to buy a typewriter.	34
		35	[ms]: telemarketer.html