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authorCase Duckworth2015-04-01 16:29:46 -0700
committerCase Duckworth2015-04-01 16:29:46 -0700
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Revise a few poems in Elegies
Also add a .gitignore.  How is this so late?
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20 link: mountain 20 link: mountain
21... 21...
22 22
23The moon is gone and in its place a mirror. Looking at the night sky now 23The moon is gone and in its place a mirror.
24yields nothing but the viewer's own face as viewed from a million miles, 24Looking at the night sky now yields nothing but the viewer's own face as viewed from a million miles, surrounded by the landscape he is only vaguely aware of being surrounded by.
25surrounded by the landscape he is only vaguely aware of being surrounded 25He believes that he is [alone][], surrounded by desert and mountain, but behind him---he now sees it---someone is sneaking up on him.
26by. He believes that he is [alone][], surrounded by desert and mountain, but 26He spins around fast, but no one is there on [Earth][].
27behind him---he now sees it---someone is sneaking up on him. He spins around 27He looks back up and they are yet closer in the night sky.
28fast, but no one is there on [Earth][]. He looks back up and they are yet 28Again he looks over his shoulder but there is nothing, not even a desert mouse.
29closer in the night sky. Again he looks over his shoulder but there is 29As he looks up again he realizes it's a cloud above him, which due to optics has looked like someone else.
30nothing, not even a desert mouse. As he looks up again he realizes it's 30The cloud blocks out the moon which is now a mirror, and the viewer is completely alone.
31a cloud above him, which due to optics has looked like someone else. The
32cloud blocks out the moon which is now a mirror, and the viewer is
33completely alone.
34 31
35[alone]: apollo11.html 32[alone]: apollo11.html
36[Earth]: serengeti.html 33[Earth]: serengeti.html