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authorCase Duckworth2015-02-27 15:51:11 -0700
committerCase Duckworth2015-02-27 15:51:11 -0700
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21"Is man the natural thing that makes unnatural things" he thought to himself 21"Is man the natural thing that makes unnatural things" he thought to himself as he looked out the kitchen window at the shed.
22as he looked out the kitchen window at the shed. He wondered who built the 22He wondered who built the shed for the first time since he'd been going out there.
23shed for the first time since he'd been going out there. "Mom who built the 23"Mom who built the shed out back" he asked.
24shed out back" he asked. "That was your father" she said. 24"That was your father" she said.
25 25
26His father. Paul had never met him. His mother had said when he was a kid 26His father.
27that his father was caught by a riptide while swimming in the ocean. He 27Paul had never met him.
28hadn't noticed what was happening until the land was a thin line on the 28His mother had said when he was a kid that his father was caught by a [riptide][] while swimming in the ocean.
29horizon. He became exhausted swimming back and drowned. His body was found a 29He hadn't noticed what was happening until the land was a thin line on the horizon.
30week later by the coroner's estimate. Paul never really believed this story 30He became exhausted swimming back and drowned.
31because his mother's face was sad in the wrong way when she told it. 31His body was found a week later by the coroner's estimate.
32Paul never really believed this story because his mother's face was sad in the wrong way when she told it.
32 33
33She said he looked like his father but she also said all men look alike. Paul 34She said he looked like his father but she also said all men look alike.
34realized he'd been standing at the kitchen window for a long time looking out 35Paul realized he'd been standing at the kitchen window for a long time looking out at the shed without realizing it.
35at the shed without realizing it. He went out to take an inventory of 36He went out to take an inventory of everything inside.
36everything inside.
37 37
38"Where you going" asked his mother. "To the shed. I'll be back in a bit" he 38"Where you going" asked his mother.
39said. 39"To the shed.
40I'll be back in a bit" he said.
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42[riptide]: riptide_memory.html