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authorCase Duckworth2015-02-27 15:51:11 -0700
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21He chopped down a sapling pine tree and looked at his watch. From first chop 21He chopped down a sapling pine tree and looked at his watch.
22to fall it had taken him eight minutes and something like twenty seconds. 22From first chop to fall it had taken him eight minutes and something like twenty seconds.
23Maybe a little change. He leaned against another tree and fished in his 23Maybe a little change.
24pocket for a cigarette. He lifted it out of its box and fished in his other 24He leaned against another tree and fished in his pocket for a cigarette.
25pocket for his lighter, failing to find it. He searched his other pockets. 25He lifted it out of its box and fished in his other pocket for his lighter, failing to find it.
26He came to the realization that he had forgotten it in his Shack (in confusion 26He searched his other pockets.
27over his True Vocation, he'd resorted to calling it simply the Shack until he 27He came to the realization that he had forgotten it in his Shack (in confusion over his True Vocation, he'd resorted to calling it simply the Shack until he could figure it out).
28could figure it out). He sighed and put his hands in his pockets. 28He sighed and put his hands in his pockets.
29 29
30"I wonder if trees are protective of their young" he said to himself, then 30"I wonder if trees are protective of their young" he said to himself, then wondered if why he had to think his thoughts out loud, then remembered he always did this, then remembered his conversation with Jill.
31wondered if why he had to think his thoughts out loud, then remembered he 31He hoped she didn't.
32always did this, then remembered his conversation with Jill. He hoped she 32He hoped that conversation was like the tree that fell in the forest with no one around.
33didn't. He hoped that conversation was like the tree that fell in the forest 33"I wonder if a thought said out loud isn't heard by anyone, if it was made.
34with no one around. "I wonder if a thought said out loud isn't heard by 34I think maybe this is what Literature (big L) is all about, if it's trying to make a connection because no idea matters unless it's connected to something else, or to someone else.
35anyone, if it was made. I think maybe this is what Literature (big L) is all 35Maybe no wood matters unless it's bound to another by upholstery nails.
36about, if it's trying to make a connection because no idea matters unless it's 36If 'the devil is in the details,' as they say (who are 'they' anyway?), the details are the connections?
37connected to something else, or to someone else. Maybe no wood matters unless 37That doesn't make sense.
38it's bound to another by upholstery nails. If 'the devil is in the details,' 38Details are details.
39as they say (who are 'they' anyway?), the details are the connections? That 39Connections are connections.
40doesn't make sense. Details are details. Connections are connections.
41 40
42"Still, a neuron by itself means nothing. Put them all together though and 41"Still, a neuron by itself means nothing.
43connect them. You've got a brain." 42Put them all together though and connect them.
43You've got a brain."