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authorCase Duckworth2015-02-27 15:51:11 -0700
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21"Riding the bus to work is a good way to think or to read" Paul thought to 21"Riding the bus to work is a good way to think or to read" Paul thought to himself on the bus ride to work.
22himself on the bus ride to work. His thoughts couldn't become real to him 22His thoughts couldn't become real to him because he didn't want to look insane to everyone else on the bus.
23because he didn't want to look insane to everyone else on the bus. His 23His thoughts came to him like someone yelling over a hard wind.
24thoughts came to him like someone yelling over a hard wind. He was trying to 24He was trying to write them on his memory but the act of writing was easier and more immediate than that of listening.
25write them on his memory but the act of writing was easier and more immediate 25He was afraid that when he looked at his memory later he wouldn't be able to read what was written.
26than that of listening. He was afraid that when he looked at his memory later
27he wouldn't be able to read what was written.
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29"Thoughts are like the wind outside a moving bus" he thought "or rather the 27"Thoughts are like the wind outside a moving bus" he thought "or rather the bus is a brain slamming into columns of stagnant air causing them to whistle past in a confusion of something."
30bus is a brain slamming into columns of stagnant air causing them to whistle 28He could barely hear the voice yelling to him over the wind.
31past in a confusion of something." He could barely hear the voice yelling to 29"Speak up" he thought to the voice, then remembered it was his own.
32him over the wind. "Speak up" he thought to the voice, then remembered it was 30He wished he'd remembered a book to read.
33his own. He wished he'd remembered a book to read.
34 31
35He looked at his hands to pass the time. They were dry in the winter air that 32He looked at his hands to pass the time.
36had seeped its way into the bus. He tried to figure out how many hours they 33They were dry in the winter air that had seeped its way into the bus.
37would make it before cracking and bleeding. "Maybe three or four" he thought 34He tried to figure out how many hours they would make it before cracking and bleeding.
38accidentally out loud. He looked around expecting stares from everyone on the 35"Maybe three or four" he thought accidentally out loud.
39seat. He was surprised that he was the only one on the bus. 36He looked around expecting stares from everyone on the seat.
37He was surprised that he was the only one on the bus.